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Post by imogen on Jul 18, 2005 20:13:23 GMT -5
Thanks jill So you're writing a story? I'd love to read it, especially if you used Cillian to inspire you!
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Post by jill on Jul 18, 2005 22:47:26 GMT -5
You're welcome. Honestly, I'd love to post my story here but I'm afraid it would be a little innapropriate. There is some sexual content (tasteful, but still..) and language. It sounds really trashy, but it's about this girl who has basically the craziest two days ever. She's on summer vacation and within two days, she meets two of the most attractive men ever, and both men are basically strangers that she falls for within minutes (one's based on cillian). They both manage to seduce her and she sleeps with both of them, thinking she'll never see them again. The thing is she's only 17 (she doesnt tell them this...they assume she's older and she assumes they'll never see her again so it doesnt matter). So when she goes back home and starts school it turns out one of the guys is one of her new teachers and one is her soccer coach (inspired by cill...he's the more smart, manipulative, controlling character). The plot twist is, the soccer coach really wants the teacher's job (it pays WAY more), and he knows that she slept with him, so he tries to manipulate the teacher to do something that will get him fired. and then it alllllllllllll backfires. i heart drama, haha. Gosh, that sounds so trashy doesn't it??! I suppose it is in a way...but yeah. I only have 4 chapters so far, cill's is in progress, almost done. Let me know if you want me to PM it to you.
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Post by seonedevinian on Jul 18, 2005 23:01:50 GMT -5
oh, hey. if i didn't say this before, i'd love to read this when you've got some done! cool stuff
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Post by imogen on Jul 18, 2005 23:24:35 GMT -5
The plot for your story sounds quite cool actually! You can either PM it to me or send it to me in an email, my address is on my profile
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Post by jill on Jul 19, 2005 12:07:11 GMT -5
if anyone wants to read it, it's here: www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1872843oh and I finished the cill-inspired characters chapter. it's pretty long...if you read it could you PLEASSEE let me know what you think? thanks!!
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Post by seonedevinian on Jul 20, 2005 0:40:33 GMT -5
i already told you this, but good work jill! thanks for sharing. and imogen, made any progress on your Crane-inspired story? and prgmrgirl? i love to read stuff like this!
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Post by imogen on Jul 20, 2005 3:38:15 GMT -5
I haven't written anything yet, I still haven't really worked out a plot yet. Although I should have, considering that I'm following the Batman Begins storyline. I think. I have no clue anymore
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Post by spikie2 on Jul 20, 2005 5:40:00 GMT -5
I'm giong to read it when I have the time but what I've read sounds really promising and cool. If they're ever going to make a film out of it, make sure to lure Cillian in a role and I would love to be someone-random-who-happends-to-have-one-scene-with-Cillian not anything big, just a two seconds shot Like, he's teaching a class and I'm in the class, with all the other infected cause then it would seem like everyone is paying more than alot of attention
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Post by minui on Jul 20, 2005 6:23:12 GMT -5
Now that sounds fun, us infected being the class... ;D
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Post by imogen on Jul 20, 2005 6:37:44 GMT -5
And it would also seem more realistic, having all us infected in his class - he's supposed to be teaching us things that are fascinating, and we all can't take our eyes off of him. It doesn't mean we're listening to a word he's saying, but the endless staring conveys the impression that we're interested in his words rather than his... well, physical attributes
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Post by minui on Jul 20, 2005 7:17:11 GMT -5
That's the way I ended up with a D in Physics. I didn't get a thing, but I stared all the while at my incredibly hot teacher... *cough*
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Post by jill on Jul 20, 2005 10:46:22 GMT -5
haha i actually do BETTER when i have a hot teacher...i'm always all like "mr brownnnn can you help me with thiss? i dont get it..." teehee
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Post by minui on Jul 20, 2005 11:13:42 GMT -5
Believe me, I tried that, too. :9
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Post by imogen on Jul 20, 2005 19:04:20 GMT -5
Good work, guys Unfortunately there are no hot teachers at my school. In all my five years of high school there are only two teachers that I thought were really great - my Maths teacher in Year Eight (Mr Kameron) and my Drama teacher for Years Eight to Eleven (Mr Z). I wish I had a hot one though, damn it.
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Post by seonedevinian on Jul 20, 2005 20:27:39 GMT -5
lol, hilarious...i never had a hot teacher either, really. a class of infecteds, being taught by the inspiration of our fever.....yeah, i'm sure we'd look verrry intrigued... wow, i'm getting intrigued just thinking about it
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