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Post by udisappointme on Oct 8, 2008 5:20:12 GMT -5
updates please... i havent been online for a long time and this is the only reason ive logged in again... were is the rest of it? chapter 11? 12? 13? im sorry to be bossy, but this fic just sums up all of the daydreams i have with mr. murphy...;D lol
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Post by keiraislife on Oct 8, 2008 7:15:40 GMT -5
updates please... i havent been online for a long time and this is the only reason ive logged in again... were is the rest of it? chapter 11? 12? 13? im sorry to be bossy, but this fic just sums up all of the daydreams i have with mr. murphy...;D lol I agree! I'm new here, but I'm already totally in love with the forum and I think this fic is just perfect! I know that blueshade hasn't been around for over a year, but she's been updating it randomly for three years now, think. I so long for her to update it!
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Post by blueshade on Oct 22, 2008 14:25:40 GMT -5
((hi guys! It’s been like forever and a half since I’ve updated this and I’m delighted that people still look at this! hehe it’s like the never ending story xD))
PART ELEVEN is > than seven
His strong hands seize your shoulders and steady you to your feet. Ugh, slipping in front of Cillian Murphy how embarrassing! “Heh, it was a bit slippery there.” He laughs in response, “Good thing I am here or else you’d’ve probably fallin in…” Gaining your balance you chuckle sheepishly and wince in embarrassment.
The both of you fade into silence as you realize how incredibly close you are to him now. Something about hearing his hushed breath, breathing up and down makes you melt and want to hold him. His breathing seems to become faster as he looks at your face, pearly raindrops on your skin and eyelashes. Taking a hand off you he moves a piece of wet clinging hair out of your face. And that’s when he says, inches away from your face, as cool as ever “You’re cute.”
Your eyes widen in a daze, your breath shudders in the cold. This must be what it’s like to be on cloud nine. Unable to speak much at all your only response is “Really?” He smiles, “Yes.” You laugh in excited nervousness, “You’re not too bad looking yourself.”
At this his smile lessens and a subtly look of wanting enters into his eyes. Moving his hands farther around your shoulders to around your back he embraces you intimately. His warmness like a body of fire in the coldness, his arms folding around you, as the two of you embrace each other on this bridge, in the dark, in this rain…
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Post by deepbluesea on Nov 3, 2008 18:02:52 GMT -5
omg please update. this story is so cute ^^ glad ur back!
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Post by ontheedge79 on Jan 20, 2009 22:32:12 GMT -5
no im obssessed now!! i need to know what happens now!! i would kill to be in that position. lol! i get it though i feel the exact same about him, its true ..... one man can change.... well... everything lol! i cant wait for the update!
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Jay
Newly Infected
True Legends never dies !
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Post by Jay on Sept 22, 2009 21:10:13 GMT -5
New reader here. Keep it coming grl. Awesome fiction.
I would've melt and blush so bad. That's breath-taken. I would faint aswell, I guess... ;D
Puh-leeeeease update.
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Post by razzthekid on Oct 16, 2009 16:41:57 GMT -5
Mmmm i just read all that fan fic. It was quite enjoyable i must say! Only thing is i can't see Cillian snapping his fingers at people- i think that's a slightly rude thing to do and i don't think he's like that. Then again maybe that's just me!
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Post by marcyliz on Sept 5, 2010 1:49:05 GMT -5
wow girl, this is really something:) Chance for any more updates? I've just started my first Cillian fic in my own language though I think I'll change it to English as it's easier for me to write in English. Weird, huh?
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Post by Crane on Sept 6, 2010 14:22:57 GMT -5
Haha! just read through this post, totally had me chuckling And this bit: At this his smile lessens and a subtly look of wanting enters into his eyes. Hilarious! ...and yet it did make me squee a bit shame the author hasn't posted in ages.. although I think we can all finish the story in our heads! Brill post and fanfic, i had a bit of escapism there, which was nice!
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Post by alejandrali on Sept 6, 2010 19:59:21 GMT -5
I have no words! this is.. gaaah! SO GOOD and she hasn't been here in almost 2 years... please, if you ever come back! post more! im lovin this and reading it over and over again!! this thread is still alive!! xO CB for you!! ;D
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Post by marcyliz on Sept 7, 2010 7:05:00 GMT -5
hmmm, maybe it's time to start a new fic:) I might give it a try as this is really a nice idea though I have to finish the one I've started two weeks ago:)
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