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Post by §hannon on Aug 13, 2005 10:43:51 GMT -5
Okay, so, I believe I'm the first to write/post a Jackson Rippner fanfic. I started it last night. What I'm planning on doing is, the synopsis to the story is interlinked with the actual movie. I'm going to post at least one chapter every day until this Thursday (the day before Red Eye comes out) and I'll end the story, somehow involving Lisa Reisert. I won't tell you how. (I deleted the synopsis cause I felt it was ruining the story.)I'll post the first bit from Chapter One: I'll have the rest of Chapter One later on today. Post feedback for me, please. Thanks.
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Post by §hannon on Aug 13, 2005 18:13:43 GMT -5
1st Chapter. I'm excited! Hahah. Feedback would be extremely helpful. Feedback.
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Post by Shelly on Aug 13, 2005 18:55:31 GMT -5
oh my! i like it alot. very good. can't wait to see how your going to tie it in with lisa.
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Post by azina on Aug 13, 2005 19:03:07 GMT -5
Oh, you've whetted our appetite. I like how you're giving us a little background that we otherwise wouldn't have on Jackson from the movie. Jackson's resentment is especially poignant and you could see it - stemming from his hated name to his best friend getting his dream life with the dream girl. You will give us more, won't you? Good job ... but want more!
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Post by §hannon on Aug 13, 2005 19:10:34 GMT -5
Thanks to you both.
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Post by §hannon on Aug 13, 2005 21:54:31 GMT -5
Any more feedback, I would greatly appreciate.
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Post by jill on Aug 13, 2005 22:09:34 GMT -5
Wow, shows what's really in a name, huh? Interesting take, having him ACTUALLY kill his parents...morbid. o.o
I really like the background with his best friend, kind of sad though. I look forward to seeing how he puts together the whole assasination, he must be REALLY smart! Hope to read more soon!
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Post by §hannon on Aug 13, 2005 22:26:41 GMT -5
You will be. Tomorrow. I'm posting one or more chapters each day.
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Post by aurora10 on Aug 13, 2005 22:44:08 GMT -5
More more more! 'Tis very good.
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Post by §hannon on Aug 13, 2005 23:24:06 GMT -5
Thanks.
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Post by Gobby on Aug 14, 2005 17:39:51 GMT -5
very nice on the back story ...ishe's 34 in the movie?...hmmm...didnt know...kool..
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Post by §hannon on Aug 14, 2005 18:10:04 GMT -5
I made up the age. I wanted to be him somewhat... mature.
Plus, it kinda set the mood because Bryan is into adulthood and married with a family. If I did the ages any younger, I'd feel I was borderline pushing it. Hahah.
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Post by §hannon on Aug 14, 2005 18:20:55 GMT -5
I'm gonna post the new chapter in a few minutes. Keep checking here.
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Post by §hannon on Aug 14, 2005 18:42:35 GMT -5
2nd Chapterrr. Dun dada dun! Hahah. Enjoy. Feedback would be helpful, as always.
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Post by azina on Aug 14, 2005 18:55:38 GMT -5
Ohh, very intriguing. Makes you wonder what Jackson has planned. Poor Bryan, he'll just be expecting a nice visit from an old friend. Ah, Jackson, you bad boy determined to get the job done no matter what. Definitely a cool pre-Red-Eye fic. More on the way I hope?
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