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Post by blue-eyed struck on Sept 7, 2005 17:02:06 GMT -5
ooo! yes! ok, no more interruptions. Go Go.
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Post by aurora10 on Sept 7, 2005 18:23:05 GMT -5
SWEET! lol I'll wait patiently.
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Post by §hannon on Sept 7, 2005 21:37:44 GMT -5
Chapter Seven. Enjoy. Feedback. Pretty please. Hahah. Warning for language.
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Post by raine on Sept 7, 2005 21:48:23 GMT -5
good... ahh now i want the next one haha
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Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 7, 2005 21:49:05 GMT -5
YES YES YES!!!!!
* rubs hands gleefully*
I am hatig Jackson even more - which is sssssooooo good!! All I could see was Cillian's face when he told her to just drink the seabreeze and when he first stood in the doorway with her cell phone in her hand!
Can't hardly wait. Shannon, you're amazing! I can't wait to see how Lise tried to get out of this one - Jackson loves tormenting her doesn't he? And we still have her "rapist" to contend with - oh, are you putting a confrontation between him and Jackson??
Sorry - I know I am slobbering all over your story but can you really blame me??
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Sept 7, 2005 21:53:22 GMT -5
oooo! he's so evil! I love it! I love it (clapping) I do feel sorry for Lisa though. she has gotten thrown around by Jackson a few too many times. But I guess, just like in Red Eye, it's his way of making sure she complies with all his plans!
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Post by raine on Sept 7, 2005 21:55:46 GMT -5
jw are they gonna fall in love? haha sorry HAD TO ASK
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Post by §hannon on Sept 7, 2005 21:57:49 GMT -5
If they were... would I tell you? Hint: No... hahah.
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Post by §hannon on Sept 7, 2005 22:23:42 GMT -5
Thank you all for the marvelous feedback! <3
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Post by Shelly on Sept 7, 2005 23:10:45 GMT -5
i know we love jackson and all but gosh. its just *sigh* such a waste of such a beautiful boy. i mean, he could be out there with lisa and *sighs again* oh man.
goood job. MORE MORE MORE.
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Post by erutuoC on Sept 8, 2005 0:58:47 GMT -5
:oohhh I can hardly wait for the next!!!
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Post by fosforito on Sept 8, 2005 1:51:12 GMT -5
I can second that! ;D
Please post more soon!
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Post by Murchadh on Sept 8, 2005 5:27:21 GMT -5
Yes, please please do Shannon! I have to say poor Lisa because of Jackson choking her s many times, and headbutting her....but it him its necissary and if she just didn't lie to him all the time she'd be in a lot less pain. I can't hate Jackson.....even if I tryed
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Post by §hannon on Sept 8, 2005 6:04:31 GMT -5
Yeah. Jackson's going through his bad Jackson phase. lol Thank you all. I'm glad you're still interested in the story.
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Post by tanya1976 on Sept 8, 2005 12:47:16 GMT -5
I like this story. It's quite good!
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