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Post by raine on Sept 4, 2005 21:07:44 GMT -5
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr arggggggggggg hmpfffffffffffff
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Post by §hannon on Sept 4, 2005 21:08:57 GMT -5
Just read it, i love it! Except your stupid cliffhangers. Grr. lol That wasn't really a cliffhanger... lol. It wasn't intended to be.
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Post by azina on Sept 4, 2005 21:42:18 GMT -5
See Shannon, even when you don't cliffhang you can't win.
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Post by §hannon on Sept 4, 2005 21:56:53 GMT -5
What's THAT suppose to mean? lmao
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Post by azina on Sept 4, 2005 22:11:11 GMT -5
Your fans still aren't happy when you end a chapter.
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Post by §hannon on Sept 4, 2005 22:12:14 GMT -5
Is that a good or bad thing...? I don't get where you're going with it. Hahah.
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Post by raine on Sept 4, 2005 22:35:18 GMT -5
it's good, it means you leave them wanting more
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Post by §hannon on Sept 4, 2005 22:51:15 GMT -5
Thanks for that clarification. Azina and I RARELY understand each other... hahah.
Chapter Six... COMING SOON! ;D
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Post by blue on Sept 4, 2005 22:51:25 GMT -5
I meant more about the cliffhangers, that kill me while I scroll to find the next chapter. I'm impatient like that, hehe.
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Post by raine on Sept 4, 2005 23:02:49 GMT -5
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i'm in agony... hehe jk but i gave you a karma for the story and fo rour little misunderstanding :/ i feel akward
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Post by Lisa Rippner on Sept 5, 2005 0:17:21 GMT -5
How could I have missed this story?! Ahg, now I'm completely obsessed! You're a brilliant writer, and your characterization is perfect! Yay for Lisa/Jackson!
Update soon, before I have an anxiety attack and die.
Thank you.
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Post by raine on Sept 5, 2005 0:19:33 GMT -5
haha update before you make me die that's great
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Post by erutuoC on Sept 5, 2005 0:27:25 GMT -5
ohhh... I love it!! cannot wait for the next one!! btw, I just love the way you kept the characters personalities so similar....I can actually imagine Lisa and Jackson saying these things!
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Post by §hannon on Sept 5, 2005 1:54:06 GMT -5
This is going to be one of THE chapters in the story. So, I hope you enjoy. Feedback, as always.
Language, intense scenes, etc.
I apologize in advance for any typos.
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Post by jill on Sept 5, 2005 2:22:15 GMT -5
Woah, creepy. I love how you show the whole love/hate thing Jackson has for her. You can really sense that while she still frustrates him, he really does care for her in a way and wants to help her, but this is like the only way he knows how...
can't wait to see what his plans are!
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