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Post by Niquinga on Sept 5, 2005 2:45:24 GMT -5
That was great Shannon, I love this story.
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Post by fosforito on Sept 5, 2005 3:03:52 GMT -5
I second that.. can´t wait to read more... Woah, creepy. I love how you show the whole love/hate thing Jackson has for her. You can really sense that while she still frustrates him, he really does care for her in a way and wants to help her, but this is like the only way he knows how... can't wait to see what his plans are!
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Post by §hannon on Sept 5, 2005 3:17:08 GMT -5
Thanks everyone. <3
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Post by aurora10 on Sept 5, 2005 3:27:37 GMT -5
Verrrry good! He's a little twisted. lol I love that!
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Post by §ilvercell on Sept 5, 2005 8:29:00 GMT -5
the romance is starting to show!
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Post by blue on Sept 5, 2005 9:17:36 GMT -5
I can't wait to see what he does next!
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Post by §hannon on Sept 5, 2005 12:51:41 GMT -5
lol.
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Post by azina on Sept 5, 2005 13:51:18 GMT -5
Wow! May I say that I think this is the best chapter yet in your story? Okay, some of my favorites ... Jackson stealing the old man's sunglasses. I can so see him doing that. Jackson, always the opportunist. I love the "remember what I told you; sell it” through his smile. I can so picture that smile.
Shannon, you have outdone yourself in the hotel scene, intense, powerful, frightening but also sexy in a weirdly twisted way that only Jackson can manage. Definitely a good example of good Jackson vs. bad Jackson. Good Jackson, fixing Lisa the drink. Bad Jackson, strangling and headbutting Lisa. I do hope you continue this because it is GOOD!
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Post by revengent on Sept 5, 2005 16:08:51 GMT -5
this is sooooo awsome! I can not wait until next ahhhhhhh............its good that the good/bad jackson confrounted lisa i wonder whats gonna be next??? keep up the good work!love it!
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Post by §hannon on Sept 5, 2005 17:30:20 GMT -5
Glad to hear.
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Post by raine on Sept 5, 2005 18:12:07 GMT -5
Aw it's excelent, you really are a great writer
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Post by Murchadh on Sept 5, 2005 18:52:42 GMT -5
I second that! Man, I love how you wrote the hotel scene in that last chapter. Lisa really does have her hands full with Jackson...and vise versa too it would seems. I can't wait to see what will happen when Lisa wakes up, she's in for it now ^_^
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Seriously Infected
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Post by britt on Sept 5, 2005 19:50:49 GMT -5
must...have...more...
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Post by §hannon on Sept 5, 2005 19:59:12 GMT -5
Hahah.
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Post by azina on Sept 5, 2005 20:14:02 GMT -5
Congratulations to not only our talented Jackson/Lisa writer but our new Global Moderator! *throws confetti* Love the blue stars! Will match your eyes now.
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