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Post by jill on Aug 29, 2005 22:20:00 GMT -5
*ponders editing what I have so far and just posting the first few paragraphs of the chapter*
Oh, and by the way, has anyone actually heard the song "God Put a Smile Upon Your Face"?
Just curious.
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Post by Niquinga on Aug 29, 2005 22:48:24 GMT -5
No, I haven't heard it, who's it by.
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Post by jill on Aug 29, 2005 23:10:20 GMT -5
Coldplay. Does anyone here like them?
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Post by Shelly on Aug 30, 2005 14:01:49 GMT -5
yeha i like them. i wish i had atlleast one of their cds but i dont. *sigh*
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Post by jill on Aug 31, 2005 19:28:31 GMT -5
Aww, you're missing out. I'll send anyone the song if you want me to, just IM me at xoxjill. So, I'll probably post the next chapter tommorrow night/early morning, cuz I don't have school Friday! ...Is anyone even still interested by now? Haha, sorry for taking so long.  School. |
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Post by Murchadh on Sept 1, 2005 5:39:55 GMT -5
Yep, still interested!
I think I may have heard the song.....but I'm not sure cause I know it does sound familiar, and coldplay is a good band. definatly have to check it out though ^_^
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Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 1, 2005 13:35:53 GMT -5
Hey, you know what?? I have already paid for a Limewire membership and I don't see myself using it quite as much right now anyways - It's unlimited, I think -
PM me and I'll send you the login and password - you can download the songs from there, I am sure.
I just don't want to post the login and password directly because I know it would be some sort of copyright issue - and I agree.
So let me know, and I'll send it out to you. You can download the software and then start downloading songs. It's a paid thing, although I warn you - it does search your own media files from the specific download folder and uses your machine as an upload engine too...
anyways - let me know --
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Post by Shelly on Sept 1, 2005 14:20:25 GMT -5
yessm. i am most definatly still interested. i heard the song ( gotta love windows media player). its good. different from what i expected from just reading the lyrics. but i like it.  how does the title relat to the story anyways? |
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Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 1, 2005 16:00:57 GMT -5
Jill,
Stop being a tease and write, write, write..please!!! (hey, that rhymes!)
I am still waiting to also read about Paul -
You know it's freaky. The only other person I have had this kind of a huge crush on was a guy named Paul, whom I adored (I am married and he is with girlfreind, so you know what lurks ther) - and he too had blue/gray eyes that I loved loved loved - so when I first started reading your fic, I was like "Please don't let her Cillian-inspired character be named Paul, please!!" - and of course, it WAS Paul,
Oh well...that's all moot. Meanwhile - write, please!!! Can't wait!
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Post by jill on Sept 1, 2005 18:26:18 GMT -5
yessm. i am most definatly still interested. i heard the song ( gotta love windows media player). its good. different from what i expected from just reading the lyrics. but i like it. how does the title relat to the story anyways? I realize it's not very obvious why I called the story that, haha. I should explain. The title relates to the story mainly because the the girl's smile is one thing that really catches the attention of both Paul and Riley. It's kind of a symbol of innocence and goodness throughout the whole story. It's a little ironic but it's supposed to show that even though she's not exactly "pure" she still has a really good heart, and a sense of innocence because she's only 17. Also, as the story goes on and the conflict is revealed (right now it's all just been intro/rising action stuff), the title and the whole song will have a LOT more relevance/irony. For now it's just kind of foreshadowing, haha. Thanks for reading! ;D That's funny about the Paul character. Except Paul's not the Cillian-inspired one, haha...Riley is. Riley and Paul are actually supposed to be kind of opposites...blue eyes are like one of the only things they have in common, haha. So rest easy knowing that! haha. |
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Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 1, 2005 18:47:22 GMT -5
Oh...I have to go back and read - I was ssssoooo sure it was Paul. Oh..now I wanna read it even more cos she's in his lap and all that....!!
OOOHHHHH makes better sense now why you have Riley!
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Post by jill on Sept 1, 2005 19:13:38 GMT -5
Yup, haha. I tried to make it as obviously him as possible... “Don’t worry about it, I was just closing my eyes for a second,” he assured her, taking notice of her nervousness. His voice was deep and earthy, with a strong accent of some sort. She immediately wanted to hear more.
“Okay, good,” she said, returning his smile. He put his iPod headphones in and reclined back again. She couldn’t help but stare at him, partially because he looked familiar for some reason. He was strangely beautiful. He was a smaller guy, very thin and maybe five or six inches taller than her. He had dark brown longish hair, subtle sideburns, and these soulful, heavy-lidded eyes. His face fascinated her. He was square jawed and his bone structure, with high cheekbones and wide, open brow bones, was strong and masculine. On the contrary, his features were somewhat delicate. Button nose; lots of freckles; and full, bee-stung lips. She decided that fate loved her, as it had granted her good timing and someone to take her mind off of the previous night.heh. |
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Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 1, 2005 19:46:45 GMT -5
ummm...  pretty much sums it up! |
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Post by jill on Sept 1, 2005 19:51:17 GMT -5
ummm... pretty much sums it up! haha why " " ? |
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Post by §ilvercell on Sept 1, 2005 20:07:05 GMT -5
^you practicaly described him down to his nursing shoes. ;D
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School.
how does the title relat to the story anyways?
pretty much sums it up!