My first C.M fic:Breakfast at Tiffany's

[craney]

Title:Breakfast at Tiffany's
Characters:Rob (Cillian Murphy),Katey (Rachel McAdams) and Cindy (Liv Tyler)
Inspired by:Deep Blue Something's song:"Breakfast at Tiffany's"

This is a teaser of my new fic..Tell me what you think of it..and tell me if you want me to continue writing it..

Chapter One:Her favorite café

Katey Connigan sat at the window table in her favorite café "Tiffany's".It was 10 o'clock a.m and it was very sunny outside.She looked at the people passing by outside the café and she smiled a little.There was no better way of spending her morning than sitting at that nice little table in a nice little café and watching people driving their cars or walking on the streets of Los Angeles.

[ontheedge]

I think you should continue writing more!

[craney]

Okay.. I shall continue:

A moment later one of Katey's good friends,Cindy, entered the café.
"Hi,Cindy!"Katey said with a smile and hugged her friend.They both sat down and Cindy ordered a cup of latté,which was her favorite drink right after orange juice.
"How's your morning been?"Katey asked.
"It's been great..Tom's at work right now so I decided to come here and spend some time with my friend", Cindy said. "Do you have any plans for today?"
"Hmm..Not really..",Katey replied. "Why?"
"Would you like to go to the new club tonight?"Cindy asked. "It's called Midnight Margarita..It's owned by an Irish guy who seems very nice."
"I'd love to come with you..I'll see you at 8 o'clock..", Katey said. "Where will we meet?"
"In front of the club..the address is Echo Park Avenue 32..Right next to Frankie's"
"Okay..That sounds great..",Katey said and smiled. The waiter brought Cindy's latté and Cindy thanked her.
"I haven't had a latté for two days 'cause I've been too busy lately",Cindy said and took a sip from her cup. "This is great latté.."
"So how's your life as a single going?"Cindy asked.
"It's going pretty good..but at times it can get quite boring..",Katey replied with a deep sigh.
"I hope you'll meet someone nice tonight..Who knows, maybe the owner is someone gorgeous..I've heard that some Irish guys can be pretty hot",Cindy said.They both laughed.
"Yeah,who knows..",Katey said in the midst of laughter.
"How long have you been together with Tom?"
"For 8 months..It's been great..He's much better than my ex-boyfriend Steve",Cindy said.
"Yeah,Steve was a jerk",Katey said.Cindy nodded.
"I honestly don't miss him anymore",Cindy said.
"Good for you",Katey pointed out. "Tom is far better."

end of chapter one

[MrsBreech]

The club is owned by an irish guy, eh? I think I know which Irish guy ya mean ;D That story is brilliant so far, craney. Keep going

[craney]

I shall.Thanks for the compliments,MrsBreech
And you're right about the Irish guy.

[craney]

Chapter Two:Midnight Margarita

It was 8 o'clock sharp.Katey met Cindy in front of Midnight Margarita and they went in.They walked up to the counter and ordered two margaritas.
"This place looks great",Katey said.Cindy nodded.
"I've never been here before",Cindy said. "And now I regret it 'cause this place really is great..My friend wasn't lying."
Katey saw a man with piercing blue eyes and he attracted all of her attention.
"Is that the owner of this place?"Katey asked.Cindy looked at the man and nodded.
"Yeah..Let's go and say hello",Cindy said.They walked up to the owner of Midnight Margarita.He greeted them with a smile.
"Hello,girls",he said. "My name's Rob O'Collins..I haven't seen you here before."
"I'm Cindy and this is my good friend Katey",Cindy said. "This is our first time here."
"I like your club,Rob",Katey said.She chuckled because of the rhyming sound of what she had said.Club and Rob She calmed herself and smiled.
"Since this is your first time here..The first drinks are on the house",Rob said.
"Thanks",Cindy said.Katey thanked him,too.
"If you'll excuse me I've got some stuff to attend to",Rob said. "I hope I'll see you later."
"We hope so,too..See ya,Rob",Cindy said.She turned over to Katey. "Well? Isn't he gorgeus or what?"
"He looks very nice..His eyes are so blue!"Katey said. She was stunned by the Irish man.
"This is going to be a great night,Cindy",Katey said.

end of chapter two

[MrsBreech]

oooo nice ;D cool story, keep goin'

[craney]

I will..very soon

[craney]

Sorry for not continuing the fic..but I've been quite busy with exams and stuff..But I'll get back to it as soon as possible. ;D

[MrsBreech]

okey dokey can't wait to see the rest of the fic ;D