Poems, rhyming lines, and short stories

[c.m.ismyxanatos]

onlygayindvillage said:

I wish i could write like that.. that was really nice, cmismyxanatos... And i'm not just saying that [because deep down inside I'm depressed.... MY BOYFRIEND BROKE UP WITH ME!!! *bursts into tears*] I'm saying it because it's true... about crane...

I'm sorry you're upset, but I am SOOOO glad you liked it!!!!! I needed some feedback on that, I was depressed about that. I hate my poetry class,

[Gutterflower]

*Bump*
I love poetry and prose, so please keep sharing

Woo, go me i can ryhme. I apologize in advance...


It's a dark hour,
watching the milk turn sour.
It's a red shower,
in the corner I hide and cower.
I think i have died,
maybe i should have tried.
He just sat and cried,
i knew it was wrong to lie.
Another dream left shattered.
collecting dust like it never mattered.
All the hopes scatter,
all the pretty girls just get fatter.
Today is like yesterday,
except the angels went away.
Today is nothing like yesterday,
yesterday never fades.

[mandourage]

hey gutterflower, that was a nice poem! I just discovered this thread and that's cool 'cause I also write poetry. I prefer to write when I'm sad, so the poems usually end up a bit sad... but hey. Here are two:

It's Okay Today

It ’s okay today
Let’s sleep for a while and pretend we’re in love
Should we wake up and face what’s above?
Us in the mirror, you somewhat nearer
Let me touch you on the glass
Cold and distant yet so familiar
It’s okay today
Let’s sit and drink some wine
We toast to ‘everything’s fine’
Let me feel you smell your scent
Like I’ve never done before
I know this should be the most familiar
But it’s not, not anymore

But never mind this anyway
I think it is okay today
Isn’t it good how it feels tonight?
The way we drink wine in the moonlight?
How we sit here pretending to be
That we don’t know that we are free

Let’s just stretch this for a little while
If you walk a tile, I’ll do a mile
Just a while, yes, just some more
And wait till we know what we’re here for

But it’s gone to be okay now,
Yes I think it’s fine
When you won’t ever go away now
No, you’re forever mine

Picture

There was a picture of you
And I locked it up in my head
I threw away the key
And there was nothing more to be said
But then fate found me
Unlocked my head and took you away
So that you could be free
It said that you weren’t supposed to stay

[Gutterflower]

WOW...they are really great!
I adore Picture, so simple yet so affective.

[poegrl]

Oh dear god I'm wiriting again..

Waiting for a Miracle


You see thousands in a day
Fire to water as Spring to fall
A lair of lips laughing, eyes smile
Isn’t always enough
When will the hands of time bring me mine?

Purest touch
Cherished smile
So simple and sublime
Waiting for a Miracle

Hear of hundreds living the dream
Earth to air as winter to summer
A young heart beating and skin feeling
Really isn’t enough
When will you wake up, begin to see

Purest touch
Cherished smile
So simple and sublime
waiting for a Miracle

Only wanting one little thing
Spirit to flesh as beginning to end
A chest aching this heart longing
All I only want
When will you feel and fall into me?

Poisons touch
Bitterest tears
So simple and unkind
Waiting for your Miracle