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Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 23, 2005 9:27:38 GMT -5
Blueshade, short as that was...worth the wait!!!  Please - seriously, please - dont keep us waiting this long?? please?? That was amazing...I was reading it over and over almost like practicing lines for a play/movie ...hmmmmhow WOULD I really sip that coffee??? Oohhh...I am going to be thinking of this scene next time I'm in Starbucks (occupational hazard of loving Cillian - I look for him everywhere, no matter how improbable) - and people around me in SB are going to have a laugh!!!! |
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Post by blueshade on Sept 23, 2005 18:26:54 GMT -5
Haha alright I won't wait so long to update next time  |
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Sept 23, 2005 18:32:31 GMT -5
"Cillian love" That's what I'm talking about! sigh.
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Post by raine on Sept 27, 2005 22:54:37 GMT -5
cmoe on come on come on ocom eon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol
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Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 28, 2005 11:23:24 GMT -5
Blueshade - read your promsie below!!! I think everyone, and I mean EVERYONE on this thread, will agree when I say this.... P-O-S-T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Haha alright I won't wait so long to update next time |
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Post by blueshade on Sept 28, 2005 21:38:56 GMT -5
I'm sorry you guys but i have been so so buzy the last few days! I haven't even had time to go on this site let alone update the fanfic but i will update soon, I'm sorry! and now i have to go to bed. *falls over*
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Post by contortionist-in-the-making on Sept 29, 2005 6:48:23 GMT -5
OMG!!! I wish i hadn't come across that until you'd finished the coffee..... but now i'm hooked... I swear, the only other time i couldn't breathe properly because of a fanfict was when i read a story of Bowie and I... someone wrote it for me, and now i've lost it... but yeah... quick, girl!! QUICK!!
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Post by Curioser on Oct 2, 2005 11:46:47 GMT -5
Gah!! I need more!
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Oct 4, 2005 17:51:20 GMT -5
Ok. I have been sitting in the fre*kin' coffee shop for 12 days now, staring at Cillian's beautiful blue eyes. Don't get me wrong, I'm enjoying every minute of it! It's just that my coffee has gotten cold and my back is starting to ache!! Do you think maybe you can write what happens next soon please!!!?
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Post by contortionist-in-the-making on Oct 5, 2005 7:41:32 GMT -5
why doesn't somebody else try?? (2 continue it that is) i'm sure blueshade wun-mind... everybodies gettin' on her case... maybe.. just a though ((I would.. but my style of writing is COMPLETELY different...))
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Post by blueshade on Oct 5, 2005 19:09:44 GMT -5
PART SEVEN equals heaven It is now dark as you two sit and enjoy the rain from the coffee shop window. Cillian sits there moving something in his fingers. There was a glint of something copper and then you figure out it's a penny. He stares at you again and without taking a moment off your eyes "A penny for your thoughts?" He slides the lincolned head coin in your direciton. You smile and lean back in your chair "Sure". "If, lets just say, a guy like me--and this is just hypothetical mind you--wanted to ask a girl, kinda like you, out to a proper date what do you think the girl would say to the boy?" He tilts his head slightly and crosses his leg. "Welll..." you begin and try to say the perfect reply "I don't know what this boy is like...the circumstances cooould be different...." He speaks playfully soft, "Well then how bout if it was around this kind of situation?" You playfully in return look up and sigh. "Well, I just don't know, I bet the boy would have to get atleast a flower for her, for her to consider respectfully." He jumps up and does a skipping motion to the door, you laugh as you realize it's still raining, running behind him as he prances for the door you grab his hand and you both dash out the coffee shop doors. Trying not to hit anyone else as you run past all the people of the coffee shope street splashing in and out of puddles. He swiftly dips down and pulls a dandelion from the sidewalk. Offering it to you with a light bow "From a boy to a girl." You laugh accepting it and squeeze his arm playfully. ((GAHHH!!! sorry I have taken ridiculously long in updating but this past like week as been crazy, and I have a fever so I can finally do this )) |
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Oct 5, 2005 19:15:40 GMT -5
;D ;D ;D THANK YOOOOUUUUU!! Is it really mean of me to be happy that you have the flu!?  Just Kidding! I hope you feel better very soon and thank you for posting! your version of Cillian is so adorable! I love him to bits!! |
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Post by ladygreenleaf on Oct 5, 2005 19:34:05 GMT -5
This is the first fan fiction I've ever read. I hate to admit it, but I always thought they'd be kind of goofy, but this is really sweet. I should have never doubted you guys. Oh, and get well soon. |
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Post by ontheedge on Oct 5, 2005 19:42:30 GMT -5
The story is really good.
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Post by Curioser on Oct 5, 2005 19:43:43 GMT -5
I loved the dandelion part. I was expecting him to find a flower shop but the dandelion is much more creative.
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Just Kidding! I hope you feel better very soon and thank you for posting! 
