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Post by ikklehen on Sept 11, 2011 18:59:19 GMT -5
Ok, I better put my two pennies worth in. Rippner is back, badder than ever! I was giggling uncontrollably writing this! I may never do one again! This is especially for you girls whom I have befriended on here, as a little thank you for the fun you share! *blushing like mad* ;D PM Me  |
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Post by Pisces on Sept 12, 2011 7:44:36 GMT -5
HOOK. ME. UP.
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Post by The Phantom Lady on Sept 12, 2011 7:52:20 GMT -5
That was so hot! I seriously like Jackson's way of relaxing! and I could easily imagine him being into something like that... The sex was amazing, well written and steamy! but you have a great, well flowing language throughout the story! and Jackson sure was lucky, two women! Are they looking for new employment  |
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Post by Pisces on Sept 12, 2011 9:45:27 GMT -5
This is EXQUISITE. I'm gonna tell you right now, that this is one of the best naughty fics I've ever read, and the fact that it's about Jackson Rippner makes it almost too much to handle!!! It's so beautifully written that I can't believe you haven't done this before. That's absolutely astounding to the point of seeming impossibility. So you're about to get a hell of a review from me - stand back, everyone!!!! ;D This fic isn't long at all - you've managed to stuff SO much sensuality and blisteringly hot sex into such a short space, and yet, the first half is set-up to the encounter. Your portrayal of Jackson is (to me) PERFECT. I don't often have the pleasure of reading a fic where I agree with the writer's version of him; this one is such a precise bullseye on how I envision Jackson that I have reread it several times. Already. The fic is like Jackson himself IN your fic - straight and to the point, yet gorgeous. He knows what he wants, how to get it, and doesn't waste any time doing so. LOVE THAT. I have to quote back some of what I can, because it's breathtaking. The passenger was Jackson. The lights of the Penthouse sign fought for reign with the street light on his glacier blue eyes. It wasn't just the women who fought to be the reflection in his Arctic gaze, it seemed. His eyes, ice on fire. This is incredible. It gets me smiling every time I read it. What a creative and sexy way to describe his eyes. May knew what Jackson liked. He was greedy. He liked to be called by his surname, he liked striking looking women, no detail was overlooked. I like this because it establishes his power in the place - his importance. Can we say ALPHA MALE??? And then the REALLY good parts...  Obviously I can't quote too much of that here but you have SUCH a gift for the erotic. And I can completely see Rippner treating himself to two women at once - that greed you mentioned above - and the feeling that he would tell himself he deserves it. The way this plays out is BEYOND hot. Completely shorn of anything romantic and focused entirely on need and lust and abandonment, they're lavishing him with so much sensual attention... and he doesn't mind giving back, either. AND.... he's GOOD. Jackson broke away looking like a satisfied general who had just won an easy battle. That sentence alone earns this fic a special place for me. THANK YOU for writing this, Ikklehen!!! To say it's brilliant doesn't at all cover my response to it. It's one of the best fics I have had the pleasure of reading - it's lush, uninhibited, unstoppable, and it's genius. CB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (BTW- I can't believe you haven't done this before... and that you say you might not do it again. No pressure of course, but PLEASE write more!!!! ;D ;D ;D) |
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Post by ikklehen on Sept 12, 2011 10:31:44 GMT -5
Awww thanks girls! ;D *totally blushing* It was a good and fun way to stretch my writing muscles! I did have inspiration for this story through your brilliant fan-art Pisces! You can guess easily which ones! To be honest, the Lisa/Jackson pairing for fic bores me now...no one has been able to topple Crossing The Line, Pisces and they never will! That was the first time I stumbled across fic and it was fantastic! Thanks so much guys! Glad you enjoyed it! |
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Post by Pisces on Sept 12, 2011 14:33:21 GMT -5
You deserve every bit of praise! This is outstanding. And I'm blushing that you were inspired by anything I created - that's very much an honor, and I appreciate it!  |
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Post by Zombiekitten on Sept 12, 2011 15:16:20 GMT -5
OMFGWhat a hot, sweet surprise you created here for us girls, Ikklehen!!! We have to thank YOU for this. Oh ma gawd... I read this in my lunch break and I swear I wasn't interested in eating anymore LOL This is PURE CLASS XXX EROTIC !!! Although very explicit and very naughty it is not a bit dirty or cheap because your style of writing is just so damn creative and original and imaginative and ... arghhh I don't know any words more in English LOL Can I just say that I was IMPRESSED as hell about your brilliant, inventive and beautiful descriptions ? OMG *still blushing as hell while thinking about it* So hot.... Jackson is truly a master in this. And the man has taste ! I'm SO jealous of these women !!! LOL Why can't I just quit my job and start working there? XD Honestly Ikklehen, I'm stunned and like Pisces I can't believe that you haven't done this before because to me your erotic writing sounds like the one from a professional erotic novellist or something. You have immense talent at this !!! I hope this wasn't the last fic you wrote. That is really a jewel of creativity amongst the XXX erotica !! Classy AND naughty !! What a delicious, spicy combination!!! CB for taking away my hunger LOL (and replacing it with a diffrent kind of hunger instead XDDDDDDD )
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Post by bunnie24 on Sept 12, 2011 15:20:59 GMT -5
I found it!! lol
OMG...that was so hot...and sexy...and sensual...you seriously should write more...yeah? no? maybe so?
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Post by ikklehen on Sept 12, 2011 18:02:32 GMT -5
Wooo! ;D I'm blown away by all your lovely comments! Jeyzz! LOL Thank you so much! You install a bit confidence in me, it's nice to be appreciated! Maybe I will do another some day. Not right away. Zombz, you are so funny! Replacing your hunger with a different kind! <3 <3 <3 |
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Post by bluestar on Sept 13, 2011 4:14:40 GMT -5
* Still Blushing * This deserved a review- That was really HOT and intense !!! Jackson is soo hot...But also I really do love the way you write, the language flowed so easily, didn't seem out of place or cheap- you are really good at this  I don't read many red eye fics because the J/L pairing bores me now so J/OC is a nice surprise, and this was espescially good, you should definitely write more !
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Post by bunnie24 on Sept 13, 2011 13:45:08 GMT -5
This is EXQUISITE. I'm gonna tell you right now, that this is one of the best naughty fics I've ever read, and the fact that it's about Jackson Rippner makes it almost too much to handle!!! It's so beautifully written that I can't believe you haven't done this before. That's absolutely astounding to the point of seeming impossibility. So you're about to get a hell of a review from me - stand back, everyone!!!! ;D This fic isn't long at all - you've managed to stuff SO much sensuality and blisteringly hot sex into such a short space, and yet, the first half is set-up to the encounter. Your portrayal of Jackson is (to me) PERFECT. I don't often have the pleasure of reading a fic where I agree with the writer's version of him; this one is such a precise bullseye on how I envision Jackson that I have reread it several times. Already. The fic is like Jackson himself IN your fic - straight and to the point, yet gorgeous. He knows what he wants, how to get it, and doesn't waste any time doing so. LOVE THAT. I have to quote back some of what I can, because it's breathtaking. The passenger was Jackson. The lights of the Penthouse sign fought for reign with the street light on his glacier blue eyes. It wasn't just the women who fought to be the reflection in his Arctic gaze, it seemed. His eyes, ice on fire. This is incredible. It gets me smiling every time I read it. What a creative and sexy way to describe his eyes. May knew what Jackson liked. He was greedy. He liked to be called by his surname, he liked striking looking women, no detail was overlooked. I like this because it establishes his power in the place - his importance. Can we say ALPHA MALE??? And then the REALLY good parts... Obviously I can't quote too much of that here but you have SUCH a gift for the erotic. And I can completely see Rippner treating himself to two women at once - that greed you mentioned above - and the feeling that he would tell himself he deserves it. The way this plays out is BEYOND hot. Completely shorn of anything romantic and focused entirely on need and lust and abandonment, they're lavishing him with so much sensual attention... and he doesn't mind giving back, either. AND.... he's GOOD. Jackson broke away looking like a satisfied general who had just won an easy battle. That sentence alone earns this fic a special place for me. THANK YOU for writing this, Ikklehen!!! To say it's brilliant doesn't at all cover my response to it. It's one of the best fics I have had the pleasure of reading - it's lush, uninhibited, unstoppable, and it's genius. CB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (BTW- I can't believe you haven't done this before... and that you say you might not do it again. No pressure of course, but PLEASE write more!!!! ;D ;D ;D) if we could LIKE posts...I'd totally give yours a thumbs up Pisces...seriously, you read my mind!! |
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Post by The Phantom Lady on Sept 13, 2011 16:45:40 GMT -5
I'd like to join the team of wanting a sequel to this!
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Post by ikklehen on Sept 15, 2011 17:58:46 GMT -5
I think the Earth moved for Jackson's harem LOL! ;D ;D |
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Post by disarm79 on Sept 17, 2011 13:17:36 GMT -5
Love how you describe the leaves. I bet you can write some nice poems Ikklehen. Of course that isn't the only part I like about your story Man. I'm starting to feel out of place on this forum with all you ladies being really talented at this fan fic stuff. Have a CB, and I hope you'll write more and share it with us. |
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Post by ikklehen on Sept 19, 2011 9:33:23 GMT -5
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I don't read many red eye fics because the J/L pairing bores me now so J/OC is a nice surprise, and this was espescially good, you should definitely write more !