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Post by Pisces on Apr 13, 2011 17:37:35 GMT -5
Disarm79- AWESOME!! ;D Please do review again here if you feel moved.  But watch out for other members' reviews - they contain many spoilers! |
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Post by bunnie24 on Apr 13, 2011 18:22:49 GMT -5
OMG--this is the coolest/awesomest/brilliant fanfiction I have ever read...i ignored school work to read this..SERIOUSLY! and that ending...sad, but perfect  |
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Post by disarm79 on Apr 21, 2011 0:18:36 GMT -5
This is an incredible piece of work...I'm so amazed. I felt foolish at times reading this story only because I was like a young teenager during certain moments. seriously, my face would get all hot when reading the lovemaking parts of the story . I felt I was actually there. Who knows how much time passed or how long I stared at the screen imagining I was Lisa after Jackson made love to her. The ending was very sad, but I think that was the perfect way how it should end. I liked how you brought the movie parts into this, to show what they felt and thought. Thank you so much for writing this I'm giving you another CB This should be a movie. I'm so disappointed it's not  I'm even more in love with Jackson...I didn't think that was even possible,haha |
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Post by Pisces on Apr 28, 2011 15:35:36 GMT -5
This is an incredible piece of work...I'm so amazed. I felt foolish at times reading this story only because I was like a young teenager during certain moments. seriously, my face would get all hot when reading the lovemaking parts of the story . I felt I was actually there. Who knows how much time passed or how long I stared at the screen imagining I was Lisa after Jackson made love to her. The ending was very sad, but I think that was the perfect way how it should end. I liked how you brought the movie parts into this, to show what they felt and thought. Thank you so much for writing this I'm giving you another CB This should be a movie. I'm so disappointed it's not I'm even more in love with Jackson...I didn't think that was even possible,haha Thank you ever so much for saying this!! I'm especially flattered that you saw CTL as something that could/should be a movie - because that's how it was in my head as I wrote it. I'm very visual, so for me, writing is more a matter of trying to put something into words that will allow the reader to "see what I'm seeing." Even more cool that you were affected enough to blush while reading!! AWESOME!! Not that I want my readers embarassed, but that's a wonderful sign that you were "right there" with Jackson and Lisa in those intimate moments. Again, I can't ask for more in the way of feedback. Thank you, disarm, for sticking with a very long fic, for blushing, and for telling me all about it! (....and for not throwing rocks at me for the ending...!) |
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Post by Pisces on Jun 17, 2011 13:25:24 GMT -5
Ran across this today - had completely forgotten about it.   |
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Post by Zombiekitten on Jun 17, 2011 20:01:49 GMT -5
Hahaha ! I love that !! ;D
Jacksons facial expression goes wonderful with the words.
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But watch out for other members' reviews - they contain many spoilers! 
I'm even more in love with Jackson...I didn't think that was even possible,haha 
