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Post by seonedevinian on Sept 4, 2005 23:39:13 GMT -5
thankyou for the exalt Murchadh! do keep writing, i really want to see where this goes!
lol, raine, your sig is hilarious! just thought i'd tell ya.
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Post by raine on Sept 5, 2005 0:31:10 GMT -5
gratzi
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Post by blueshade on Sept 5, 2005 0:36:12 GMT -5
srry this has nothing to do with the fanfic but can you tell who gives you the karma?
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chanel
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Isn't he lovely, isn't he wonderful!
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Post by chanel on Sept 5, 2005 2:03:07 GMT -5
Good question Blueshade. I wanna know too. I'm also new like you
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Post by raine on Sept 5, 2005 16:46:45 GMT -5
you can give it to anyone (you can also tak eit away) it's just a thing on if someone did somehting cool or said something funny... i think th eonly one who has negative karma is one girl and she deserves it and she's at -22 i think...
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Post by seonedevinian on Sept 6, 2005 1:31:32 GMT -5
good lord, who is this girl at -22? i don't think i've seen her here... oh yes, Blueshade and Chanel, to answer your question: the only reason i know Murchadh exalted me is that she said so earlier in the thread, so other than that, there's no way to know who exalts you and who smites you, to my knowledge. and welcome to the forum!
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Post by Murchadh on Sept 6, 2005 6:14:38 GMT -5
Someone who have albviously offended and or angered peole with her posts, though I will not say who it is just as Raine didn't cause it is kinda rude, she knows who she is.
I't good to know where you get the karma from....sometimes I get on and have new ones and have no idea where it came from and I can't say anything to the person/people, but being annonomous in it is cool to.
As for the fic, I'm working on typing it now, it will probibly be close to the length of chapter 3....atleast thats how it looks in my notebook but we'll see how it goes after I type it cause I rewrite alot of stuff if I think of something else. HOPEFULLY will have it posted later today ( by tonight around...8:30 at the latest I think), if I have the patence to sit and type it this morning what with bouncing off the walls with school starting tomorrow and so many questions that are driving me mad. .......morning rambelings.......sorry...... just hit me with a hammer or something if I get annoying
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Post by Murchadh on Sept 6, 2005 12:18:17 GMT -5
Here's the half of chapter 4, the rest should be up later ^_^ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 4 Let the mental basing begin! (Part 1)
If she hadn’t been nervous around him before, she was buried in it now. The multiple implications his words held cut off any witty retort she could have mustered about his mental state being choice for making any improvements what so ever on anything, let alone his toxin.
“No. Well, if you don’t know then maybe a volunteer would be too much to hope for. I am not opposed to other means of acquiring subjects, but I assure you it would be much easier on them if they should choice to willingly cooperate.”
Sarah didn’t know what to do at the moment but remain firmly planted right where she was in the hope he would let her go long enough so she could do something, preferable bolt to find a better means of handling him.
‘Yah, like that’s going to happen. Keep dreaming.’ was the rather sarcastic response from her subconscious.
She didn’t remember him intimidating her this much at Arkham, and he wasn’t even standing over her, he was sitting down! She soon decided she didn’t want to find out how things would go should she refuse. Judging by his grip on her wrist she would have one h*ll of a fight on her hands if she said no.
‘He doesn’t even need to be built like a bouncer or some street thug with those eyes. God d*mn it I promised myself I wouldn’t let him get to me and what am I doing now, nothing, that’s what! I’ve never liked the easy way out but do I really want to push him? Right now I need to play it carefully. This is a dangerous game, and so far I seem to be losing horribly.’
The only thing she seemed capable of doing around him, mentally bashing herself. But there was nothing for it, she had no idea to the extent of what Crane was capable of, now didn’t seem the proper time to find out either. If it was possible his grip had just gotten tighter around her bony wrist. Sarah winced when she felt his nails digging into her bruised flesh, looking down she saw pearls of blood seeping out from under his fingers creating red lines down her hand.
Suddenly a loud screech broke the heavy silence, with a jerk Crane released her wrist, blood now spreading over the back of his hand from several punctures. Sarah took a few steps back away from the doctor her eyes shifting from him to the crow now perched on the end of her bed watching Crane.
Crane was no longer the only element in the room giving her the jitters. Her brain started to throb against her skull, her heart beat against her ribcage like a caged animal ready to rip its way out through her throat.
‘No bird would do that, no normal bird. Unless... maybe it was protecting its owner. And that’s a BIG maybe…I’m not its owner. I’ve only seen a crow do that when…but how could it be…how and why would he be here. He couldn’t…not again, he’s at peace now with Shelly, the murder avenged, how could it be happening again?’ Her mind was racing with impossible notions as to how and why, but none seemed right.
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batman
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Post by batman on Sept 6, 2005 14:40:12 GMT -5
Love the story. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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Post by Murchadh on Sept 6, 2005 17:34:31 GMT -5
its ok then?? I wrote this while I was half asleep in my mom blaring music and trying to get caffine into my system to keep me awake for the day. I was having doubts about how good this part was, thats one reason I posted this part first and not the whole thing (and cause my eyes were screaming at me to stop typing ^_^)
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Post by raine on Sept 6, 2005 18:37:14 GMT -5
ti's lovely dear, good job
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Post by Murchadh on Sept 6, 2005 18:55:55 GMT -5
Thanks raine *blushes* heres chpter 5....or the second part of 4, whatever you want to call it. I think I've watched the RE music Video to much cause my Crane is getting elements of Jackson LOL. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 5 Let the mental basing begin! (Part 2)
Crane too was mystified by the animals’ strange behavior, and after glancing at Sarah he could tell she was questioning its appearance.
‘Birds would not be above attacking a human, it has been known to happen however rare. But not in such a manner, it attacked me the moment I drew her blood.’
He remembered well her little ‘story’ of her friends’ resurrection, but had written it off as impossibility. People did not rise from the grave, a year after becoming deceased, whole and thirsting for the souls of those who murdered them. It was pure fantastical bullsh*t. The kind of thing you would tell a child, and any one else gullible enough to believe, that they could be killed by an avenging ghost or cadaver bent on send them to hell.
The crow, after glancing from Sarah to Crane seemed to decide it was no longer needed and promptly flew out the open window as swiftly as it had entered. They both remained still watching to see if the visitor would return to interrupt any further goings on. After many silent moments Crane looked back at Sarah, studying her reaction once more.
Sarah mentally shook herself to return to matters at hand. With a sigh she left the small bedroom, wandered down a cramped hallway into a whitewashed bathroom of blinding light. She grabbed Band-Aids, a few cloths dampened with water from the sink, and a bottle of bactine. After she washed the blood off her wrist and hand and being sure it bleeding at stopped she turned off the accursed light and went back into the bedroom with her supplies. Glancing at Crane quickly to see if he had moved she tossed the supplies onto the bed not really wanting to get close enough for him to grab her again. Not that she was sure it even mattered since she had no idea how well he could move the rest of his body, she still didn’t want to take any chances though.
This amused him to no end, but his face remained impassive as he took care of the wounds inflicted by the crows’ sharp beak and talons. Once done her set the medical supplies on a small bureau next to her bed and resumed his study of her person.
She hadn’t expected him to move so suddenly, so she stumbled back a few paces when he fluidly stood from the bed with a smirk playing across his lips once more. After picking up his shirt and buttoning it up to the top three he quickly strode over to her. Sarah backed up until she felt her back collide with the wall, knocking some of the breathe she was holding from her lungs.
This time he didn’t touch her right away, but stood so close all he need to do was lean forward the slightest bit for her to be fully pinned to the wall by his body. “Was that another friends of yours Sarah, hm? Some guardian angel sent to protect you from me? Because I think you will need more than a bird to save you should you choose the hard way to work with me.” He leaned forward enough to touch her, from which she flinched, but could more no further from him then a few centimeters.
“In Gotham your not safe in your own home, people need a lesson and they do not seem to want to learn. I am their teacher Sarah, in some ways not so different from your vigilante. The question still stands, will you help me or no? Time is running out darling Sarah, it is now time to make your choice.” Before she could blink his hands were around her throat, pushing her fully into the wall and slowly causing her vision to blur and darken until she could no longer make out his form. Her final thoughts before blacking out were not of Eric but Jonathan Crane, a desperate reach for sanity that he no longer seemed to have a foothold on. Then she fell into darkness.
Tell me what you all think please!
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Post by raine on Sept 6, 2005 19:22:18 GMT -5
wow
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Post by seonedevinian on Sept 7, 2005 2:59:57 GMT -5
wow is right. i have a soft spot for the protection of birds. *sigh* i do love the Crow. anyway, good crossover. Crane's a bit more violent here, due to his recent complete loss of sanity. i like it.
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Post by Murchadh on Sept 7, 2005 18:04:24 GMT -5
Thank you so much for the support you guys, it means a lot to me it really does *hugs all around* . Yah, he is a bit more violent....I need to stop watching that video.....or not
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