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Post by §hannon on Aug 17, 2005 1:28:04 GMT -5
I think I'm going to go right now. I'm just trying to write down the main points, plots, and details to Chapter 5 and the chapters ahead so that I don't forget them tomorrow morning. Hahah. If I come up with a good idea and don't write it down, I'll be kicking myself later.
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Post by blue on Aug 17, 2005 1:39:40 GMT -5
kinda late for me to be saying this but I love it, woo! [yeah, I started reading it just now lol]. Dying to know what happens next. HURRY UP! Hee hee. But your sleep is important too
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Post by §hannon on Aug 17, 2005 11:19:34 GMT -5
I got my sleep. And I'm BACK IN ACTION. Hahah. Chapter 5 will be posted in a little bit. I just gotta finish it.
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Post by dior4ever on Aug 17, 2005 14:05:14 GMT -5
awesome thanks!!!
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Post by blue on Aug 17, 2005 17:34:24 GMT -5
woot yes! I'll be waiting ;D
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Post by §hannon on Aug 17, 2005 17:50:47 GMT -5
MKAYY. Shannon had a serious problem with writer's block today. Nothing was coming out the way I wanted it to even though I had all the ideas and points written right here in front of me. So, I apologize for it taking FOREVER. Anyway. It's a long one again. Hahah. I hope you enjoy it. Another chapter later, Chapter 6, as promised. Also, again, I'll include a warning as for brief use of language. And feedback, as always. I love to hear from you all.
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Post by Gobby on Aug 17, 2005 17:57:25 GMT -5
squeal!.....yay its out....thank u!....thank goodness....oy nice job
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Post by §ilvercell on Aug 17, 2005 18:07:13 GMT -5
WOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOO! GREATGREATGRAET,I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!(sorry,i'm hyper)
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Post by §hannon on Aug 17, 2005 18:50:47 GMT -5
Thank you, thank you. That chapter was so stressful to write. I strained my brain cells getting it out. Hahah. I'm interested to hear everyone else's thoughts as you guys read the chapter.
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Post by tanya1976 on Aug 17, 2005 18:59:04 GMT -5
Okay, I finally got down to reading it. Good job, Shannon!
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Post by §hannon on Aug 17, 2005 18:59:32 GMT -5
Thanks Tanya.
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Post by dior4ever on Aug 17, 2005 19:22:49 GMT -5
Shannon, that was fantastic!!!!!! Awesome!!!!i want more!!!!
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Post by Shelly on Aug 17, 2005 19:32:06 GMT -5
wow. awesome writing! this chapter especially. if i were wrtiing this i think i would be feeling just how jacksons feeling. keep it up!
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Post by fosforito on Aug 17, 2005 19:33:27 GMT -5
Hi Shannon, I´ve started reading your story today and I´ve ended up reading all five chapters in one time. The only thing I can say is: WOW - amazing! You´re a very good writer and I can just say the same as the other members already said concerning visualising what you´ve written. I´m very excited to read the next chapters, what´ll happen when Jackson and Bryan meet each other and of course Jackson´s "next job" - Lisa´s dad. Keep up the good work! Greetz, Alexandra
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Post by dior4ever on Aug 17, 2005 19:34:29 GMT -5
yeah, that story is great!!!
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