Post by deathlife on Nov 4, 2005 22:21:17 GMT -5
Chapter 1
after the nightmare of Lisa's life;Lisa is happy in the hospital bed with no Jackson Ripnner."My life is perfect!"Lisa shouted.Doctors came in so quick she hadnt even noticed."what's wrong Lisa?"asked one of the doctors."oh nothing"Lisa answered back."im just so happy."she said."oh ok get up youre dad is waiting for you downstairs.Joe her dad was so happy that he ran and hugged her.They walk together to te cab.when they were home her dad told her to sit down and talk."i have good news and bad news ,which would you like first?"Lisa's dad asked.Lisa's emotions turned scared when she heard there was bad news."ummm...i would like to here the good news first."Lisa answered back."OK!good news is that Jackson is in prison;bad news you really need to see him."Joe said."hahaha i prefer the first one"Lisa said.The next day Lisa woke dressed brushed her teeth and went downstairs."good morning."Joe said."good morning."Lisa said back."you ready to see Jackson?"Joe asked."yup i'll be allright it's not like will see eachother face to face"Lisa answered."O.K. a cab is outside waiting for you."said Joe."Allright bye-bye Dad"Lisa said.They kissed and Lisa went out to the cab."To Miami prison please."Lisa said to the cab driver.as they were on the freeway Lisa was thinking of adopting a child since she wants a family."that will be $25.96 miss"the cab driver said."here thanks"Lisa said.the prison looked like a torturing place.While she went in to the gates all the gangsters murderers were staring at her."Jackson Ripnner please"Lisa said."wait in that room miss."the police guy said.while walking to the room she was wondering why people are calling her miss all the time.When she went into the room she was surprised to see to chairs in each side of the table."oh god!"Lisa said.She sat down in one chair and heard the police guy said"Jackson Ripnnerstop playing around and go to the talking room!"Lisa wasnt really prepared to see Jackson yet.When the dor opened Jackson went in blood pouring all over his face and bruises almost everywere.The police pushed him in and he sat in one chair staring angrily at Lisa's eyes
I know i have some errors but please forgive me
HEY THIS IS MY COUSINS Sarah's fanfiction so yeah if you want the next chapter give feed back!
after the nightmare of Lisa's life;Lisa is happy in the hospital bed with no Jackson Ripnner."My life is perfect!"Lisa shouted.Doctors came in so quick she hadnt even noticed."what's wrong Lisa?"asked one of the doctors."oh nothing"Lisa answered back."im just so happy."she said."oh ok get up youre dad is waiting for you downstairs.Joe her dad was so happy that he ran and hugged her.They walk together to te cab.when they were home her dad told her to sit down and talk."i have good news and bad news ,which would you like first?"Lisa's dad asked.Lisa's emotions turned scared when she heard there was bad news."ummm...i would like to here the good news first."Lisa answered back."OK!good news is that Jackson is in prison;bad news you really need to see him."Joe said."hahaha i prefer the first one"Lisa said.The next day Lisa woke dressed brushed her teeth and went downstairs."good morning."Joe said."good morning."Lisa said back."you ready to see Jackson?"Joe asked."yup i'll be allright it's not like will see eachother face to face"Lisa answered."O.K. a cab is outside waiting for you."said Joe."Allright bye-bye Dad"Lisa said.They kissed and Lisa went out to the cab."To Miami prison please."Lisa said to the cab driver.as they were on the freeway Lisa was thinking of adopting a child since she wants a family."that will be $25.96 miss"the cab driver said."here thanks"Lisa said.the prison looked like a torturing place.While she went in to the gates all the gangsters murderers were staring at her."Jackson Ripnner please"Lisa said."wait in that room miss."the police guy said.while walking to the room she was wondering why people are calling her miss all the time.When she went into the room she was surprised to see to chairs in each side of the table."oh god!"Lisa said.She sat down in one chair and heard the police guy said"Jackson Ripnnerstop playing around and go to the talking room!"Lisa wasnt really prepared to see Jackson yet.When the dor opened Jackson went in blood pouring all over his face and bruises almost everywere.The police pushed him in and he sat in one chair staring angrily at Lisa's eyes
I know i have some errors but please forgive me
HEY THIS IS MY COUSINS Sarah's fanfiction so yeah if you want the next chapter give feed back!
