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Post by blue-eyed struck on Nov 21, 2005 21:55:52 GMT -5
*whines* Too short!!  ok.sorry. *spoiler* So 'JR' is Joe Reiser! Nice twist!! I love Jackson's honesty with Lisa! If it didn't became clear in this chapter that he truely has feelings for her, then I don't know what will! And, they're finally on the damn ship! lol! YEY! *claps* I can't wait to see what huge cliffhanger you'll leave us with in the last chapter! Excellente! *exalts* |
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Post by Kaylee on Nov 21, 2005 22:37:01 GMT -5
wahhh. how are you gonna possibly end this. the killing, the honesty-ness. to the next part it will probably take one GIANT cliffhange to make things run. and those aren't fair! I like this chapter, even thoug it was so short  . I bet jakson's gonna show her one of the forbidden rooms and they try to kill him  . that would be kinda cool. Did i ever say how much this whole story rocks? because every time there is a new post i am on the edge of my seat reading intently till i scroll and its well, done ( the chap) Hip hip hooray for you ! <33 kaylee |
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Post by this bike is a on Nov 21, 2005 22:40:45 GMT -5
oohh Lisa made Jackson speechlesss.
yay finally on the boat
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Post by §hannon on Nov 22, 2005 0:05:19 GMT -5
Yes, finally, I know. Hahah. Thanksgiving Break starts tomorrow for me. So, I may even have the next chapter by tomorrow.  |
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Post by §hannon on Nov 22, 2005 0:21:35 GMT -5
i read your story before i was able to join the board, and i can't wait to see the end of it. Wish there would be Red Eye 2, inspired by your story.  Great job. I thank you. |
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Post by §hannon on Nov 22, 2005 16:34:57 GMT -5
Mkay. I'm gonna start writing the next chapter tonight. I could possibly have it tonight. |
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Post by beyond_beautiful on Nov 22, 2005 17:34:05 GMT -5
So short ... but yet so ... SWEET!! Gives you a cillian bar |
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Post by aurora10 on Nov 22, 2005 18:33:39 GMT -5
That rocks!!!!!! Thank ye, Shannon. ;D
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Nov 22, 2005 19:13:24 GMT -5
YEY! The last Chapter tonight!!! WOOHOO!
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Post by §hannon on Nov 22, 2005 22:26:22 GMT -5
Well, it's not going to be the last chapter... lol.
I said around 2 chapters. I guessed a little under. Hahah.
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Post by §hannon on Nov 22, 2005 23:35:38 GMT -5
So short ... but yet so ... SWEET!! Gives you a cillian bar Thanks for the Cillian bar. |
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Post by aurora10 on Nov 22, 2005 23:39:08 GMT -5
*holds onto story* Don't eeeeeeend!!!!!
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Post by §hannon on Nov 22, 2005 23:43:46 GMT -5
Aww. lol
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Post by beyond_beautiful on Nov 23, 2005 11:42:11 GMT -5
*sniffle* I don't want it to end either  |
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Post by §hannon on Nov 23, 2005 14:14:22 GMT -5
All I did was plan the chapter last night. I'm writing it now and it should be done sometime today. Hopefully. lol
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ok.sorry.
. I bet jakson's gonna show her one of the forbidden rooms and they try to kill him 
. that would be kinda cool. 
Great job.
