I Didn't Know - One Shot - G

[beyond_beautiful]

this was in my head last night ... and i just wrote it down

I Didn’t Know
Written by Jesika Anne
2005©

I didn’t know that he was there, sitting in his car, watching me as I slept.

I didn’t know that he was following my every move as I got up and ate my breakfast.

I didn’t know that he was there watching as I took a shower and then dressed for work.

I didn’t know that he followed me as I drove to the hotel.

I didn’t know that he sat there, in the lobby, quietly watching as I spoke to customers.

I didn’t know that he saw how tired I was and how much I longed to go home.

I didn’t know that he left a short while before I did.

I didn’t know that he was in my apartment, hiding in the shadows.

I didn’t know that he saw me slowly undress my self.

I didn’t know that he saw my eyes linger on my scar.

I didn’t know that he felt rage burn in his veins at the sight of it.

I didn’t know that he wished to kill the man who had done that to me.

I didn’t know that he wanted to take my pain away.

I didn’t know that he had a longing ache in his heart.

I didn’t know that he couldn’t wait to hold me in his arms.

I didn’t know that he watched as I slipped beneath the covers of my bed.

I didn’t know that he waited until I had fallen asleep to slowly move towards me.

I didn’t know that he was there until he sat down on the bed.

I didn’t know that he wanted to make me happy as I rolled over and smiled at him.

I didn’t know that he never was going to leave me again as he leaned down and kiss me.

I didn’t know that he was giving up his job to be with me as he slowly took my clothes off.

And

I didn’t know that he was in love with me as our bodies joined as one.

[Lisa Rippner]

That was good! I liked the middle the best. The end kind of startled me.

[this bike is a]

Woww, that was super good

[beyond_beautiful]

lisaripner said:

That was good! I liked the middle the best. The end kind of startled me.

Startled you as in how?

[beyond_beautiful]

orangekoolaid said:

Woww, that was super good

Thanks ;D

[Lisa Rippner]

beyondbeautiful said:

lisaripner said:

That was good! I liked the middle the best. The end kind of startled me.

Startled you as in how?

No, not a bad startled! I just wasn't sure if the piece was post or pre Red Eye, and I thought it was pre, but then they sort of had sex when she found him in her bedroom, so... yeah. It had to be post, lol. But that was just me (I'm slow like this) taking a step back and going, "Huh?" Then, "oooohhhh." Great job, though, seriosuly!

[beyond_beautiful]

lisaripner said:

beyondbeautiful said:

Startled you as in how?

No, not a bad startled! I just wasn't sure if the piece was post or pre Red Eye, and I thought it was pre, but then they sort of had sex when she found him in her bedroom, so... yeah. It had to be post, lol. But that was just me (I'm slow like this) taking a step back and going, "Huh?" Then, "oooohhhh." Great job, though, seriosuly!

;D