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Post by ontheedge on Aug 24, 2005 19:31:42 GMT -5
Here's a poem i wrote while thinking about Red Eye He's the perfect stranger Handsome,charming and cunning He'll steal your heart as he tries to steal your life He's a focused fellow He does his job well Failure is not an option He'll do everything it takes to get the job done He won't make any attachments He won't be your friend He'll be true to his mission Right down to the end He's handsome,charming and cunning He's an enigma He's Jackson Rippner  |
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Post by Murchadh on Aug 24, 2005 19:58:39 GMT -5
I like it! I have respect for anyone who can write a good poem, and this is definatly good. To the point and detailed, very accurate too.
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Post by ontheedge on Aug 24, 2005 20:01:40 GMT -5
Thank you very much!
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Post by Murchadh on Aug 24, 2005 20:41:05 GMT -5
your very welcome |
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breakaway
Newly Infected
Any way the wind blows...
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Post by breakaway on Aug 25, 2005 20:28:15 GMT -5
I really like it! It's so good, and so true.
Love,<3
Lindsay
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Post by Niquinga on Aug 27, 2005 0:55:38 GMT -5
That's really good, thank's for sharing it.
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Post by ontheedge on Aug 28, 2005 15:35:58 GMT -5
You're all so very welcome!
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redeye28
Newly Infected
CillIaN MuRpHy Is HoT, SeXy AnD CuTe
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Post by redeye28 on Aug 28, 2005 16:09:30 GMT -5
That is awsome.......
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Post by ontheedge on Aug 28, 2005 16:14:24 GMT -5
Thank you
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Post by §ilvercell on Sept 5, 2005 18:16:49 GMT -5
lisa: he sure does hit the spot!*continues eating Jackson-bar*
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Post by raine on Sept 5, 2005 18:22:22 GMT -5
that's cool now i might write one too  |
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Post by aurora10 on Sept 5, 2005 18:25:25 GMT -5
Hehe! I likey. |
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Post by revengent on Sept 5, 2005 18:42:50 GMT -5
cool!
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Post by omgiluvvscarecrow on Sept 9, 2005 19:59:00 GMT -5
hey, i like it too..
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batman
Seriously Infected
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Post by batman on Sept 9, 2005 20:26:36 GMT -5
That's good.  |
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