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Post by ohiouniversitygirl on Dec 15, 2005 4:09:37 GMT -5
Jinna....*exhalt*! Thanks for bringing back "old Crane"! He's so good when he's bad! I love how Wihelmina rolled her eyes at him in the car...he doesn't seem like the guy who would take that too well! ;D
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Post by ohiouniversitygirl on Dec 15, 2005 4:27:21 GMT -5
Omg...c.m....that was a seriously awesome chapter!!! ;D You really added a lot to the story and it's cool you took the time to write such a detailed contribution!! I love how you showed Crane making the effort to be a gentleman but still protecting his own feelings behind his emotional reserve. It was a good detail that he mentioned getting together again but then left before she could respond....great job!!! ;D
I'll exhalt you as soon as soon as I get my powers back, lol! ;D
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Post by c.m.ismyxanatos on Dec 15, 2005 4:42:12 GMT -5
Yay, somebody liked it!!! *does happy dance* Sorry, I get self-esteem issues when I write. I am so glad you liked it, I tried very hard to get some detail into it and insight into the characters, especially Rose...though I didn't do as good a job as I would have liked. Anyway, thank you so much! I will probably be back to write more, but not so much next time.  |
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Dec 15, 2005 20:11:53 GMT -5
I am impressed Sun Sun! That was good! welcome to the...umm.. club, I guess!? I hope you write more!  *CB as soon as I'm allowed* |
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Post by ciaran on Dec 15, 2005 22:05:05 GMT -5
lol, I think you owe as many Cilly bars as I do blue-eyed. Amazing chapter cmis/sun sun/xan, etc. lol You really did add a lot of detail and I liked how he was being a gentleman although he just made a complete a$$ of himself. Good job people! woot woot, post 2000!!!!! I'm doubly obsessed now.  |
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Post by scotsrockgod on Dec 15, 2005 23:07:36 GMT -5
My GOD, cm! That was incredible!  Face it Crane. No woman is ever going to like you. You’re not good enough. Not strong enough. Not yet. But you could be. You are smarter than all of them, if you only embraced your gifts, you could… Awww, how sad! |
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Post by c.m.ismyxanatos on Dec 15, 2005 23:19:46 GMT -5
*stares at all the lovely people who liked her post in total shock for about...an hour* OMG, totally speechless...thank you so much!!! i want to write more, and I probably will as soon as someone else does, since I am out of school now. Thanks again, I feel all warm and tingly now.
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Post by girl in the sharkskin tuxedo on Dec 17, 2005 14:26:28 GMT -5
that chapter was awesome, c.m! i really liked it. i might write more a little later.  |
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Post by c.m.ismyxanatos on Dec 17, 2005 14:40:25 GMT -5
Thank you jinna! I hope you do, I would love to see more written in this.
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Dec 17, 2005 15:54:48 GMT -5
lol, I think you owe as many Cilly bars as I do blue-eyed. Amazing chapter cmis/sun sun/xan, etc. lol You really did add a lot of detail and I liked how he was being a gentleman although he just made a complete a$$ of himself. Good job people! woot woot, post 2000!!!!! I'm doubly obsessed now. lol! I've lost track of who I still owe CBs to! I need to make a list. congrats on your 2000th post! You're catching up to me fast! And someone was making fun of me for posting too much, being here only a short while!  sooo...who's next and when is the next chapter coming? We need Silvercell (our Oliver, as Azina put it. ) to come and post her infamous post! |
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Post by §ilvercell on Dec 17, 2005 19:41:47 GMT -5
Check the sig!lol
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Post by girl in the sharkskin tuxedo on Dec 17, 2005 21:30:03 GMT -5
~ After he finished his classes for the day, Jonathan went to his car. Wilhelmina stopped him outside the doors. He tried not to look in her eyes, knowing he'd probably freak her out or something. "It was very considerate to help me out of the car. I would have been soaked if you didn't help me." "It's nothing." He began to walk off again across the parking lot, but he could hear Wilhelmina clicking behind him. He turned around abruptly, startling her a bit. "Would you like to go to dinner?" What are you doing?, his other voice shouted at him. She doesn't deserve your respect, your emotions, your sympathy!Shut up, he managed not to say out loud. Wilhelmina straightened, relaxing. "Sure", she said with a reassuring smile, "Would you like my phone number...or should I get yours?" She was grinning, cheering up. Jonathan was happy to see that their little spat was behind them, but his thoughs disagreed. Why are you forgiving her so easily? Don't you see how much control she has over you? You're her puppet! A hobby, a toy, she thinks nothing of you.Rose scribbled her number down on a notepad she was keeping in her jacket and handed the paper to him. "I do feel bad for leaving you such a mess today..." She fished in her purse for her wallet, in which she handed him $40. "To pay for your dry cleaning." Jonathan looked down and blushed, and he didn't notice the small click of her camera, taking another beautiful shot of him. ~ |
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Post by §ilvercell on Dec 17, 2005 22:09:02 GMT -5
picture.Jon.wet......................I LOVE YOU!
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Post by ohiouniversitygirl on Dec 18, 2005 4:52:03 GMT -5
I gave you another CB, Jinna...great job!! I love how you continued with the picture taking theme...it really opens up the door for a lot of possibilities in the future. I also like how abruptly he asked her to dinner...it's cute to see how he is struggling with his nervousness. Thanks for setting up for their second date!! I can't wait to see what's going to happen!!! ;D
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Dec 18, 2005 16:58:55 GMT -5
^haha! opens the door for a lot of possibilities only if WE could see those pictures as well!
Jinna: more scarecrow! *claps* hmmm... he only appears when he's being nice to her! Great chapter or eh continuation... *gives CB*
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*CB as soon as I'm allowed*
