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Post by §hannon on Sept 25, 2005 18:10:02 GMT -5
I haven't stopped listening to it!
I've been humming it all day... singing it all day...
God. They're so great. Hahah.
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Post by jill on Sept 25, 2005 18:28:12 GMT -5
Isn't it an addictive song? And do you see how it kind of reminded me of Look Up a little?
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Post by dior4ever on Sept 25, 2005 18:29:40 GMT -5
im listening to it right now on i tunes!!!!
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Post by jill on Sept 25, 2005 19:00:27 GMT -5
im listening to it right now on i tunes!!!! Hah, I'm trying to fix my iTunes because it's not letting me update my iPodddd...  I hate computers. So, what did you think of the chapter? |
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Post by seonedevinian on Sept 27, 2005 0:15:37 GMT -5
i thought the chapter was brilliant! all the research you've been doing on writing technique has paid off, although i always thought you were good. everyone can always improve, though, so keep up the excellent work!
i love the way Riley was in shambles at Ash's appearance, so cool and realistic. the whole story has this very lush, young and sexy feel to it, with the added bonus of the priveledge-masking-problems theme that is developing so well without becoming a mere device. you really have a natural talent, Jill, i truly think you could be successful in this field. you really are much better than i was at your age, so keep working and i know you'll go far!
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Post by Shelly on Oct 3, 2005 20:50:26 GMT -5
jill my dear, when do we get the next chapter?
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Oct 4, 2005 17:45:14 GMT -5
What happens next!? Please let us know soon!!
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Post by Shelly on Oct 20, 2005 16:32:49 GMT -5
is there no more of this story?
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Post by jill on Oct 20, 2005 18:22:22 GMT -5
There is, I just thought noone was reading it anymore, haha.
Plus, I've been super-busy lately...but I'll try to write more soon.
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Oct 20, 2005 20:51:36 GMT -5
ehh... please tell me what gave you that impression!! Hey, just for the hell of it, post the next chapter and see how many people will respond!  I already said your story is better than recent books that I've read! Don't leave us hanging now that it's getting good!! |
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Post by Shelly on Oct 21, 2005 16:10:04 GMT -5
I completly and absolultly agree with the above statement. in short, DITTO
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Post by jill on Oct 23, 2005 20:08:01 GMT -5
Aw, thanks.  Good news and bad news. The bad news is that I got caught reeeeeally drunk last night and will most likely be grounded for a long time. The good news is that will leave me more time to write! So expect a new chapter by this time next week. |
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Oct 23, 2005 20:22:56 GMT -5
Aw, thanks. Good news and bad news. The bad news is that I got caught reeeeeally drunk last night and will most likely be grounded for a long time. The good news is that will leave me more time to write! So expect a new chapter by this time next week. *chuckles* Sorry, that just reminded me of the time I got drunk in highschool and got in trouble for it! ahh..the memories.. That's a bummer Jill, but I'm sure the "drunk night" was all worth it! I'm so glad you haven't given up on this story. You have alot of fans. Can't wait to read the next chapter. |
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Post by jill on Nov 6, 2005 1:33:46 GMT -5
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Nov 6, 2005 14:58:28 GMT -5
YEY! Next Chapter!  |
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I hate computers.
I already said your story is better than recent books that I've read! Don't leave us hanging now that it's getting good!!
