Post by mrsscarecrow on Mar 4, 2006 7:08:11 GMT -5
An idea keep buzzing in my head, a story, but i don't have the "dare" to write it down, cause maybe it's too stupid....it's inspired a little bit from the movie "Secretary" with Maggie Gyllenhall...
there is a girl, Ann, a kind of hypochondriac, who establish a particular "relationship" with his new and young doctor, Dr Jonathan Grimm(who must be Cillian)...and the character of the doctor is based a little bit upon Dr Jonathan Crane (but he’s not crazy! Only the physicall features and some attitudes etc..) .he's an icy, glacial man, and his eyes themselves seem ice.
The sum of the story is:
Ann Pharrell is a very particular kind of hypochondriac. Her old doctor is the only one who can help her, while psychologists and psychiatrists are not able to.
This because of the profound bond they have (he his the father she has never known....).
Unfortunately, one day the man must leave his job. Ann is desperate, because she knows for sure nobody else could help her. But the old doctor is replaced by the young and really competent Dr Jonathan Grimm, a man with a disquieting beauty, whose eyes are pure ice. He's even known as a man who doesn't ever have any human relationship with his patients...he is so glacial...
Ann, one morning, must go to the doctor. She feels pain, she's worried, but she's also afraid, because of Dr Grimm's reputation, and because she wonders if he could help her.
But when she sees him for the first time, something happens....their eyes meet, and she feels a strange thrill through her body, a feeling she's never felt before. She'll never forget the glance he took at her.
From their first visit, their particular relationship grows....not a kiss, not sex, nothing like that....only a game made by unsaid and said words, glances, and his hands on her body...they dream of each other, they love each other, they desire each other…
Untill one day, their relation has a turning point....and Ann realizes she’s going to lose him. She must do something, and make him understand how much they are important to each other, otherwise he’ll leave her, forever…..
The story is still in progress, maybe I’ll change some parts etc….Maybe I’ll developp it in about ten chapters, each chapter with a title…. but I’m not sure….
Anyway, should I write down it, according to you? Or maybe it’s not such a good story, not very original, maybe a little bit stupid? Of course I’ll write it in my mother tongue, and I don’t know if I’ll translate it and post it on the forum…..maybe if someone would like to read it…but it will take me a long time to do this….
there is a girl, Ann, a kind of hypochondriac, who establish a particular "relationship" with his new and young doctor, Dr Jonathan Grimm(who must be Cillian)...and the character of the doctor is based a little bit upon Dr Jonathan Crane (but he’s not crazy! Only the physicall features and some attitudes etc..) .he's an icy, glacial man, and his eyes themselves seem ice.
The sum of the story is:
Ann Pharrell is a very particular kind of hypochondriac. Her old doctor is the only one who can help her, while psychologists and psychiatrists are not able to.
This because of the profound bond they have (he his the father she has never known....).
Unfortunately, one day the man must leave his job. Ann is desperate, because she knows for sure nobody else could help her. But the old doctor is replaced by the young and really competent Dr Jonathan Grimm, a man with a disquieting beauty, whose eyes are pure ice. He's even known as a man who doesn't ever have any human relationship with his patients...he is so glacial...
Ann, one morning, must go to the doctor. She feels pain, she's worried, but she's also afraid, because of Dr Grimm's reputation, and because she wonders if he could help her.
But when she sees him for the first time, something happens....their eyes meet, and she feels a strange thrill through her body, a feeling she's never felt before. She'll never forget the glance he took at her.
From their first visit, their particular relationship grows....not a kiss, not sex, nothing like that....only a game made by unsaid and said words, glances, and his hands on her body...they dream of each other, they love each other, they desire each other…
Untill one day, their relation has a turning point....and Ann realizes she’s going to lose him. She must do something, and make him understand how much they are important to each other, otherwise he’ll leave her, forever…..
The story is still in progress, maybe I’ll change some parts etc….Maybe I’ll developp it in about ten chapters, each chapter with a title…. but I’m not sure….
Anyway, should I write down it, according to you? Or maybe it’s not such a good story, not very original, maybe a little bit stupid? Of course I’ll write it in my mother tongue, and I don’t know if I’ll translate it and post it on the forum…..maybe if someone would like to read it…but it will take me a long time to do this….
