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Post by aurora10 on Sept 8, 2005 22:39:05 GMT -5
That was unbelievable!!!!!!!! You rock, Azina!!! ;D
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Post by azina on Sept 8, 2005 22:49:31 GMT -5
Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it.
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Post by fosforito on Sept 8, 2005 23:29:58 GMT -5
great chapter! as it said before: you rock!! can´t wait to read more...
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Post by azina on Sept 11, 2005 1:40:40 GMT -5
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Post by fosforito on Sept 11, 2005 1:54:34 GMT -5
whoaaa...this chapter´s great!!
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Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 11, 2005 10:17:36 GMT -5
OOhhhhh....Am I completely sadistic that I enjoyed that chapter so much??? But Machiano is scum! Any man who needs to attack a helpless lady to prove himself is scum!
Make him suffer, Azina....make him pay, please! Moms should not be messed with!
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Post by azina on Sept 11, 2005 23:42:50 GMT -5
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Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 11, 2005 23:52:06 GMT -5
Azina, the imagery in this chapter is BRILLIANT!!!
I was IN THE CELL, with Crane as he made Machiano confess. I could see the dark dingy room in the asylum, and see the terror in his face!!
This chapter, in terms of its descriptive prose - is amazing. Your best work so far, just for how vivid the images are!
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Post by fosforito on Sept 11, 2005 23:56:30 GMT -5
whoaaaa Azina, this was a great chapter!!!
And your detailed description especially with the maggots...whhaaa!
As I said before - let him suffer. let him suffer.
Go ahaed - Jon!
Please post soon again!!
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Post by §hannon on Sept 14, 2005 21:33:38 GMT -5
You're such an amazing writer, Azina. As J. Crane said, your imagery is brilliant to the point that I can't even describe it.
Anybody that hasn't read your writing, really should, considering it's one of the best fanfics I've ever read (and you know I'm not a Crane fan). Hahah.
Keep writing, m'dear. <3
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Post by seonedevinian on Sept 15, 2005 3:39:37 GMT -5
Azina, brilliant imagery. that maggot and blood hallucination was disgusting. in a good way. wow, awesome! so cool, and i love the Scarecrow here, so demanding. Machiano will pay.
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Post by azina on Sept 18, 2005 1:32:38 GMT -5
Here's the next part. The cat and mouth game continues ...
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Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 18, 2005 13:14:27 GMT -5
It's amazing how with the simple act of "spoon-feeding" Crane can humble this guy sooo much...it's so much humiliation!
Azina, I get the feeling you have been doing more than letting Crane scare this guy in the last couple of chapters - you are making Machiano angry! Crane keeps him restrained, tied down and all Snake can think is the violence.
Something tells me that violence is about to explode pretty soon - and I WANT to be there when it does!!!
* oooohhhhhh ffuuuuunnnn!!!!***
I know you are super busy, but please don't keep us in suspense this long!!! I really want to see the explosion..
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Post by azina on Sept 18, 2005 14:03:14 GMT -5
You're very astute. Something big will happen and soon. I hope to write it out tonight if I can get my homework done early. Yeah, Machiano is getting really pissed.
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Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 18, 2005 14:17:59 GMT -5
Thanks, Azina. It's good to know I am reading the story right.
BTW - I will repeat this - your imagery is very powerful. When you write about Machiano's anger, it is very easy to see it. It's like you're in the room, this silent fly on the wall, watching Crane as he inflicts terror on the mind of (for once) a totally deserving "victim"
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