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Post by fosforito on Oct 12, 2005 16:31:39 GMT -5
Hi to all! Well, now it´s done!! Here comes the sequel to my story "A twisted tale from a broken heart".The sequel is called "In statu nascendi" - well, it´s the working title at the moment, I don´t know, if I´ll keep it. For those of you who still didn´t read the first story I highly recommend you to read the first story before starting with the sequel to understand what´s going on. Here´s the link for both stories: www.jonathancrane.tkor people.freenet.de/fosforito/index.html (if the first one doesn´t work for you somehow) As most of you are used already there will be also some R-rated parts in the story, but this time I´ll change my posting system: ALL chapters will pe posted here on the board and at the same time on the website . When an R-part comes up it will be marked and you´ll get the website like to finish reading the chapter there. I hope, this posting system will make it more comfortable for you to read the story. And I also want to say this right away: This fan fiction will have R rated parts and will also contain language, strong sexual contents and violence. Please have in mind, that I can´t take any responsibility for possible damage, the story might have on you, k? I hope you´ll like the new story and please - feedback, feedback, feedback!!!!
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Post by fosforito on Oct 12, 2005 16:36:51 GMT -5
Here´s the first chapter! Enjoy and please don´t forget to leave feedback!
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Oct 12, 2005 17:45:48 GMT -5
ahhh...now here is the Dr. Crane we all know and love! It will be very interesting to see how he's going to act when Alex is back in his life! *Smiles slyly* Yes, I know she will be back! GREAT start! I know you don't dissappoint, so I will be looking forward to the next chapters!
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Post by azina on Oct 12, 2005 20:58:23 GMT -5
Oh, I love all the details on Crane's indulgence in luxury, it makes Crane's reality all the more real. I'm interested in how his comfy, well-ordered world will suddenly change once Alex returns.
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Post by fosforito on Oct 13, 2005 4:03:54 GMT -5
Hi to all! I´m glad to hear you like the start of the story. Now here´s the second chapter! Enjoy and please don´t forget to leave feedback!
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Post by §ilvercell on Oct 13, 2005 5:35:52 GMT -5
i somehow KNEW you would put the W word in there!lol
"it's just wrigglin!"
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Post by fosforito on Oct 13, 2005 5:47:03 GMT -5
hehe Just have in mind she´s on the way to do sth. (at the moment we just know she wants to go to the court, too, just as Jonathan, but we still don´t know who she is...) Her intention is to get out of the airport as soon as possible and an "obstacle" for her could be this officer, so she is flirting with him so get out of this situation easily, like not to give the guy a reason to become suspicious somehow Did you noticed that I mention the same time (10:30 a.m.) for Jonathan and also for the woman to leave to get to the court? .. well, I hope you like the story though i somehow KNEW you would put the W word in there!lol "it's just wrigglin!"
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Post by azina on Oct 13, 2005 8:37:42 GMT -5
From the impression I'm getting she's a spy/assassin ... or is that just a front she was putting up for the officer? Actually with Homeland Security now she probably would get detained big time with a line like that. LOL
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Post by fosforito on Oct 13, 2005 8:40:15 GMT -5
hehe ;D I know but thanx God it´s just fiction here.. BUT...we still don´t know who the woman is or what she´s supposed to do at the court, right? From the impression I'm getting she's a spy/assassin ... or is that just a front she was putting up for the officer? Actually with Homeland Security now she probably would get detained big time with a line like that. LOL
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Post by azina on Oct 13, 2005 9:21:46 GMT -5
Oh! I know! Right when Dr. Crane is about to give his key testimony in court to the insanity plea, Miss Deveraux stands up and aims a gun at him and says "You will wriggle with me or die!"
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Post by fosforito on Oct 13, 2005 9:24:45 GMT -5
LMFAO!!! ;D well.. I don´t think THIS will happen actually...but that´s a nice thought though, hehehehe Oh! I know! Right when Dr. Crane is about to give his key testimony in court to the insanity plea, Miss Deveraux stands up and aims a gun at him and says "You will wriggle with me or die!"
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Post by azina on Oct 13, 2005 9:28:09 GMT -5
LMFAO!!! ;D well.. I don´t think THIS will happen actually...but that´s a nice thought though, hehehehe Oh! I know! Right when Dr. Crane is about to give his key testimony in court to the insanity plea, Miss Deveraux stands up and aims a gun at him and says "You will wriggle with me or die!" "Now you have only one choice in this matter, Dr. Crane," Miss Deveraux continues. "One choice that is of the utmost importance ... do you want chocolate syrup or honey before wrigglin'?"
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Post by fosforito on Oct 13, 2005 9:30:31 GMT -5
ROFL!!! Oh cmon Azina, what are you doing to me now? I want you guys to break your heads about who this woman could be and what would happen next and you´re pulling out the Honey Cannon now, hahaha ;D LMFAO!!! ;D well.. I don´t think THIS will happen actually...but that´s a nice thought though, hehehehe "Now you have only one choice in this matter, Dr. Crane," Miss Deveraux continues. "One choice that is of the utmost importance ... do you want chocolate syrup or honey before wrigglin'?"
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Post by azina on Oct 13, 2005 9:31:48 GMT -5
I'm sorry. Ugh. I'll try to be more intellectual. I'm at work and I just want to play. Crane would be fun with the honey cannon.
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Post by fosforito on Oct 13, 2005 9:32:42 GMT -5
I know I know But seriously now: what do you think, sista? I'm sorry. Ugh. I'll try to be more intellectual. I'm at work and I just want to play. Crane would be fun with the honey cannon.
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