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Post by The Phantom Lady on Feb 8, 2012 7:24:13 GMT -5
”Who is she?” her trembling lips asked; she was shivering and felt how much energy she used on not breaking down. “What does she have that I don’t have?” Her voice was a low whisper, almost as if she was scared of hearing those words and she was… she had always feared that woman in her mirror standing there practicing would be her and now she was…
She was waiting for him, the man she loved so much to return from where she could only guess, fear… when she closed her eyes she saw him naked in the arms of some beautiful blond woman with perfect breasts, luscious hips who laughed and smiled all the time… Who was everything she wish she could be for him…
If you are above 18 and want to read further please respond in this thread or send me a PM to receive the link.
Thank you my 'Jack' you lovely, confusing married man...
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Post by Zombiekitten on Feb 8, 2012 11:57:16 GMT -5
Would love to read that !!!   |
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Post by Pisces on Feb 9, 2012 16:24:57 GMT -5
Link me!! ;D
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Post by bunnie24 on Feb 9, 2012 20:08:45 GMT -5
link me--link me--link me--go ahead and link me!! *sorry, I was singing in a tune, lol*
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Post by Zombiekitten on Feb 10, 2012 14:03:27 GMT -5
WOW!!  Hot, sensual AND emotionally intense! OMG I could absolutely connect with her because I know this feeling oh so well... the feeling of not being good or pretty enough, of questioning yourself and of jealousy... It's a hurtful feeling and it leads to nowhere... You described that very intense and emotional. And oh... the sensuality...  I LOVE it when a man shows such ... devotion to a woman in this special kind of way... And Jackson... OMG he just knows what he's doing.... UNF And... That he didn't want the favour returned... Was that a proof of love? Am I right with this? ...or.... was all he did, all the affection and tenderness and devotion he showed, only to keep her quiet? To calm her with sex?  OMG.... What an emotionally deep story.... Thanks for sharing! CB! |
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Post by Pisces on Feb 11, 2012 10:43:33 GMT -5
Sensual and bittersweet. I think every female reader would be able to identify with her body issues, and yikes, the idea of wanting (NEEDING) to measure up for someone like Rippner... whoa. That was an aspect you conveyed with great vividity, Rose; I really felt for her in those moments. And yeah, could you really trust someone like him? I think it would be hard for anyone, lol, but your female lead finds it even more so; the destructiveness of their involvement is drawn so starkly. Have a CB!!! |
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Post by The Phantom Lady on Feb 11, 2012 11:11:01 GMT -5
Aaaw thank you so much girls! I love hearing how you see the story, and Zombie the ending was intended as a question mark just like you said; I have my own, personal view of it but I wanted questions to remain.
I felt Rippner would be perfect to play the male lead in this; because as you said Pisces, there is a destructiveness in having to meassure up to him and his personality... that and the man who inspired this has a Jackson-ness about him...
The deal is, I'm Online involved with an older married man; he told me from the first time we met he was married and his wife wasn't that interested in sex and after cheating on his first wife he would never physically cheat on her again but that was why he had relationships Online... I fell for all that... Still I keep imagining his wife finding out; how hurt I'd be if I knew my man was finding passion elsewhere...
I showed him this story and he loved it, he had a completely different take on it of course...having the very male perspective.
Funny story, turned out I am not his only girlfriend either
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Post by jennifer on Feb 20, 2013 19:57:32 GMT -5
I would love to read this story!!!!! Please send me this!!!!
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Hot, sensual AND emotionally intense!
I LOVE it when a man shows such ... devotion to a woman in this special kind of way... 
OMG.... What an emotionally deep story....