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Post by bunnie24 on Jul 12, 2012 15:42:42 GMT -5
that new picture of Crane as a judge got me inspired. So it's another Crane/Jackie story; but they're not married...it's kine of like an alternate reality IN the already alternate reality (way to get Inception-like on us, Bunnie!) but yeah...PM me if you want to read it, I'm almost done, so it might take a minute or two to receive it
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Post by The Phantom Lady on Jul 13, 2012 2:48:02 GMT -5
Oooh please do send it my way!
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Post by Zombiekitten on Jul 14, 2012 10:50:16 GMT -5
That sounds more than sexy !!! Wanna read it !
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Post by bunnie24 on Jul 14, 2012 18:42:31 GMT -5
Okay, I def will send it to ya girls...but I'm still working on it, hopefully I'll finish it tonight and get it to ya
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Post by The Phantom Lady on Jul 15, 2012 13:02:29 GMT -5
Oh wow!
The coldness of Crane, then him turning soft when he put the jacket on her, now that sent chills down my spine!
The way he persuaded her, forced her to enjoy it was amazing, you wrote it so perfectly! Crane is a dangerous man, but an obsessed Crane... OMG!
Thank you so much for sharing this!
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Post by bunnie24 on Jul 16, 2012 13:06:55 GMT -5
you're welcome BR; I'm glad you enjoyed it! I felt the ending was a bit sucky, but so long as you like it
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Post by Zombiekitten on Jul 17, 2012 19:32:40 GMT -5
Yes, the usual hotness still was there, but I really enjoyed the tenderness with which he treats Jackie and does his first time with her in this little alternative universe one shot. And I liked that she liked it. And that he did her no harm. I don't know how you experience this while writing but... I have to admit, in my mind, while imagining Crane getting intimate, I just can't "get rid" of his glasses. LOL I mean... I can't imagine him not wearing them, even when he's making love. XD I always have to force myself to "think them away". And: Crane is sexy as a judge... so powerful and demanding. Can't wait to see that cameo....
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Post by bunnie24 on Jul 17, 2012 20:07:48 GMT -5
Yes, the usual hotness still was there, but I really enjoyed the tenderness with which he treats Jackie and does his first time with her in this little alternative universe one shot. And I liked that she liked it. And that he did her no harm. I don't know how you experience this while writing but... I have to admit, in my mind, while imagining Crane getting intimate, I just can't "get rid" of his glasses. LOL I mean... I can't imagine him not wearing them, even when he's making love. XD I always have to force myself to "think them away". And: Crane is sexy as a judge... so powerful and demanding. Can't wait to see that cameo.... I can't wait either!! and I always imagine Crane taking his glasses off before he 'beds'...but I think sexy thoughts when he takes them off
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Post by bunnie24 on Aug 2, 2012 16:04:19 GMT -5
Update: I'm not sure but I might turn this into an Alternate Universe story line for Jon/Jackie...but I don't know yet...
but I'll definitely keep you guys updated XP
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Post by wikkleshamrocks on Aug 14, 2012 16:47:50 GMT -5
Ahhh sorry Bunz I missed this! I'm rubbish at keeping track of stories, please don't think I'm being rude I'm just a busy lass. May I have the link please?
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Post by bunnie24 on Aug 14, 2012 17:18:28 GMT -5
of course you can, wikkles! I'll send it right now Edit: I've turned this one shot into a full fledged story
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