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Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 12, 2005 21:12:50 GMT -5
Jill, watch out. Someone here is going to get too hungry and start going mad (meaning me...)
Seriously, though - this is great stuff. Please post more soon, I can't wait to read more. Especially since I spent days thinking Paul=Cillian, only to be corrected by you!!
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Post by jill on Sept 12, 2005 22:29:29 GMT -5
Wow, thanks everyone! ;D I don't have to go to school tommorrow cuz I have to go to the hospital (long story, I'm fine...ankles got swollen up due to a scotch binge on Saturday night and I'm playing it up for all I can, lmao. I'm such a bad kid.) SO... ...maybe if I get my homework done early enough I can write the chapter! It should come fairly easy, now that I have this to drool over:  ...i think he got sexier, somehow.  amazingg. But in the meantime and if you havent already, let me know if you're still reading plz, heh.  |
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Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 12, 2005 22:32:39 GMT -5
Jill, what part of "WE'RE HUNGRY FOR MORE, PLEASE POST SOON!!!" do you not understand??
I. Want. More. Of. Riley!!!!
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Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 12, 2005 22:34:22 GMT -5
BTW, hamana hamana - is it me, or does he get better and better daily??
He's a fine wine I want to sip slowly - I don't know if I should open him up and enjoy him now or let him age a bit more and enjoy him as he gets more and more delish!!!
Man, I am going to be one horny 40 year old - cos Cillian at 30 is mmm..mmm...good, at 40 he is going to be positively smokin'!!!
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Post by jill on Sept 13, 2005 16:10:08 GMT -5
LMAO, "hamana hamana". Exaaactly. What's that saying about men getting more handsome with age? I don't know. He does though, definately.
Who cares if he's twice my age, I have a thing for older guys, haha.
Good news: I started writing AND don't have to go to school tommorrow! Maybe that scotch binge wasn't such a bad idea, lmao. I do kinda feel like crap though. But whatever, I'll be fine.
And because I feel like it, here's the first paragraph of the next chapter. It's a rough draft so I might change it, but let me know what you think so far hehe.
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Sept 13, 2005 16:17:02 GMT -5
OH MY OH MY! No no! Please don't change anything. What you do need to do is to add the rest! You are a teaser! bad jill!
Anyway, I'm starting to see there is more to Riley, he's becoming darker! What does he want from her, besides the obvious of course!? Also, I have a sneaking suspicion that Riley will become Ashley's coach!? Or did you make that obvious? Either way, I can't wait to see where this story is going!
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Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 13, 2005 16:18:59 GMT -5
BTW - check out this pic at the top of this page. Is it me, or does the neckline of his t look majorly stretched out?
I would love to be the one that has strectched it out of proportion by tugging it to pull him closer for one more kiss....*sigh*
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Sept 13, 2005 16:22:17 GMT -5
All I can say about the picture, is that the stylist is one lucky (bleep)! Touching and tugging at him and running fingers through his hair! SIGH (faints)
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Post by jill on Sept 13, 2005 16:34:47 GMT -5
BTW - check out this pic at the top of this page. Is it me, or does the neckline of his t look majorly stretched out? I would love to be the one that has strectched it out of proportion by tugging it to pull him closer for one more kiss....*sigh* Hah, I just thought it was a v-neck at first but now that you mention it it DOES look a tad stretched... ...and you just gave me ideas, haha.  OH MY OH MY! No no! Please don't change anything. What you do need to do is to add the rest! You are a teaser! bad jill! Anyway, I'm starting to see there is more to Riley, he's becoming darker! What does he want from her, besides the obvious of course!? Also, I have a sneaking suspicion that Riley will become Ashley's coach!? Or did you make that obvious? Either way, I can't wait to see where this story is going! Thanks, heh. I'm still working on the rest...I'm getting distracted easily, frustrating as it is. I'm sooo glad I'm portraying his "dark" side more now, heh. And to answer your question, he kinda likes her but at the moment ...he just wants the obvious, haha. He's a pretty selfish guy. And about your second question...Ashley's on the flight to make her soccer tryouts tommorrow. Riley's on the flight to start his new coaching job. Will he be her coach? We'll see... |
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Post by jill on Sept 13, 2005 18:46:40 GMT -5
Okay so, as I'm making progress on this chapter and keeping it tasteful, it's still pretty racy material. Like, borderline non-postable. BUT I feel like it'd be taking away from the story if I omitted too much. I don't think I'll be able to post it.
If you want me to send it to you when I'm done, PM me. When I finish I'll send it to everyone who sent me a PM.
One request- please post comments HERE, so that the thread doesn't die, haha. Thanks!
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Post by iamthemaxx on Sept 13, 2005 19:06:31 GMT -5
jill, i exalted you. not only because of your story, but your scotch binge. i know you're young, but i don't care. i just know, i like ya.
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Post by jill on Sept 13, 2005 19:09:43 GMT -5
lmao, thanks. it was fun at the time, i must admit.
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Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 13, 2005 19:13:10 GMT -5
Jill, stop getting distracted and POST!!!!!!
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Post by jill on Sept 13, 2005 19:16:49 GMT -5
Hah, wish I could but I can't post it! It's too sexy.  |
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Post by Shelly on Sept 13, 2005 19:24:16 GMT -5
no body would care! we want more!
maybe you could just retitle it :warning! incredibley good storry. contains mature content
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amazingg.
