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Post by blue-eyed struck on Oct 24, 2005 15:56:05 GMT -5
He should wear silk, yes. I wasn't actually thinking of the "sexy" factor, but more of the "comfort". I mean, in this story, as a teenager, he was neglected and was not permitted normal luxuries such as nice clothes, so I would think he would try make up for it once he had the money and the freedom. And, silk is the most comfortable fabric.
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Post by §ilvercell on Oct 24, 2005 20:07:01 GMT -5
true! ;D
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Post by scotsrockgod on Oct 24, 2005 20:18:00 GMT -5
Okay, you guys, see what you've done. I've started writing about how he acquired his pajamas.
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Post by Gobby on Oct 24, 2005 20:21:40 GMT -5
erhahahahaha sh!t that cracks me up haha his jammies The Novel
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Oct 24, 2005 20:29:00 GMT -5
Okay, you guys, see what you've done. I've started writing about how he acquired his pajamas. Sorry! At lease you'll get more readers interested this way! "Crane's Jamies: boxers? Silk? bare!?"
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Post by scotsrockgod on Oct 24, 2005 20:37:08 GMT -5
Sorry! At lease you'll get more readers interested this way! "Crane's Jamies: boxers? Silk? bare!?" I'm not really mad, lol. It's actually a fascinating question for a sick mind like mine.
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Post by ciaran on Oct 24, 2005 20:45:01 GMT -5
^and what a mind it is. ha ha, this was my first comment to you, that Crane should wear silk pajamas. A little naughty, a little nice. LOL You're actually going to write the pj's fanfic, I love it! That should be hiliarious. Waiting ever not so patiently. ;D
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Post by azina on Oct 24, 2005 21:24:39 GMT -5
Wow, I just began reading this and finished "Cold Shower." How devastating for Jonathan to be taunted about his sexuality (or lack equipment/ability) and then be teased in such a brutal way about it in front of the new girl. What's tragic is she didn't defend him so ultimately he was left alone in that painful situation. I look forward to reading the rest of this.
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Post by stormy on Oct 24, 2005 22:00:27 GMT -5
Ha! Is the title going to be "The Pajama Game"? (Old movie I never saw, but I remember the title).
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Post by scotsrockgod on Oct 24, 2005 22:21:52 GMT -5
Wow, I just began reading this and finished "Cold Shower." How devastating for Jonathan to be taunted about his sexuality (or lack equipment/ability) and then be teased in such a brutal way about it in front of the new girl. What's tragic is she didn't defend him so ultimately he was left alone in that painful situation. I look forward to reading the rest of this. Oh. Well. It was a one-shot. Unless you count the pajama off-shoot. Glad you liked it, Azina. Poor Crane. I really force him to suffer.
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Post by scotsrockgod on Oct 24, 2005 22:22:11 GMT -5
Ha! Is the title going to be "The Pajama Game"? (Old movie I never saw, but I remember the title). I will if you want!
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Post by stormy on Oct 24, 2005 23:03:25 GMT -5
Well, it's your fic, so your choice, of course, but I just had to share that title when it occurred to me.
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Post by scotsrockgod on Oct 25, 2005 22:14:58 GMT -5
Well, it's your fic, so your choice, of course, but I just had to share that title when it occurred to me. We'll see ... I got a lot of writing done in the doctor's office this morning, but I'm a little unsure where to go now. I'm torn on if the silk jammies work or not. Hmm.
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Post by stormy on Oct 25, 2005 23:58:19 GMT -5
Hm...someone could give them to him as a gift. An anonymous someone, perhaps? Around Christmas or his birthday? He would probably have all kinds of fun trying to figure out who gave them to him, and almost as important, why. Lots of stuff for him to analyze. "Why would someone do this? It makes no sense." Never mind me, I'm just in a creative mode at the moment. I need to turn that creative thing off anyway so I can get to sleep.
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Post by fosforito on Oct 26, 2005 7:19:55 GMT -5
Hey SRG! I read "Cold Shower" today and I must say, it´s very well written! I really like it! I know that you´re reading my story (well, the first one) and I´m reading Azina´s stories too and it´s really interesting how we three are doing our own interpretation of Crane. It even starts with those little things like family issues: in your case, Crane has siblings and his mom seems to be very rude, in my and Azina´s case, Jon seems to be the only child and also his relation to his mother is a different one. Also the characters involved around Jon are different so far, but I must say, your Susannah kinda reminded me of my Alex - although I think, in this "special situation" in class (which was very very bad for Jonathan I must say, poor Jonathan) I´m sure she would have reacted different and have beaten the guy up Well, I can´t say what kinda pyjamas would Jonathan prefer (maybe really ones made of silk to give it more a "luxury" asspect) but anyway... ;D I´m very curious how your story will go on.
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