|
|
Post by iamthemaxx on Sept 20, 2005 6:29:16 GMT -5
ya know what, this story is a lot of fun. =)
|
|
|
|
Post by this bike is a on Sept 20, 2005 10:47:34 GMT -5
haha, what the heckk is going on
|
|
batman
Seriously Infected
Posts: 106
|
Post by batman on Sept 20, 2005 12:58:46 GMT -5
This is a very interesting story.
I can't wait to find out if Lisa goes through with the marriage or not.
|
|
|
|
Post by moviechick1984 on Sept 20, 2005 13:37:18 GMT -5
|
|
|
|
Post by this bike is a on Sept 20, 2005 13:38:46 GMT -5
Ohh. Haha, so he's basicly crazy.
|
|
|
|
Post by moviechick1984 on Sept 20, 2005 13:43:27 GMT -5
LOL! Hee hee yeah, you could say that. He has become a lot crazier since he spent that short time in jail. Oooh, I just love a crazy Cillian! Or should that be crazy Jackson? Oh, well, same person! ;D ;D ;D
|
|
|
|
Post by Kaylee on Sept 20, 2005 14:03:08 GMT -5
me too...
Jackson and Crane are just more fun when they're insane.
XD i love the story.
<33 kaylee
|
|
|
|
Post by Murchadh on Sept 21, 2005 18:29:12 GMT -5
This is a rocking story, I can't wait to read more and see if Lisa goes through with the marraige to save her sister or if they somehow get away from Jackson and Roland. Roland seems nice enough, but Jackson is majorly obsessive over Lisa. I love it, keep it coming LaTissa!
|
|
|
|
Post by moviechick1984 on Sept 21, 2005 20:23:43 GMT -5
Chapter 11.
*****************
The sight of so many wedding gowns made the vomit rise in Lisa's throat as she entered the bridal store. She had begged, pleaded, and even offered again to sleep with Jackson if he'd change his mind about this wedding. No such luck. She would be his bride, or her sister would be dead.
"Why Julie?" she sobbed. She and Jackson were alone in a corner of the dress section. "She has nothing to do with this."
"She does now," Jackson smirked. "You see, Lisa. Julie's such an easy target. So shy and interverted. I knew she wouldn't put up a fight."
Now Lisa felt even sicker. "Jackson, I...I have to go to the bathroom," she said.
"Okay. I'm coming with you," he said.
"I can go myself."
He snickered. "Lisa, darling, don't you remember what happened on the plane last year? We don't want to experience that again, do we?"
He hung his head low while keeping his gaze on her.
She wiped some tears away that had begun to fall and shook her head.
He smiled. "Good. Now let me accompany my wife to the ladies' room."
"I'm not your wife yet," she hissed. "So stop calling me that."
He sewed his lips into a tight, angry frown. She could see the fury building up in his big eyes.
"I won't try anything funny," she said. "You have to believe me, Jackson. How can you make me your wife if you don't trust me?" An unsavory taste was left in her mouth every time she called herself his "wife".
Jackson was taken aback by her question. He hated to admit it, but she did have a very good point.
"Alright," he said. "Go on. But I will be waiting by the door when you return."
While Lisa was out of sight Jackson dialed some numbers on his cell phone.
"How's the deal coming along?" he asked when Roland picked up.
"Peachy," Roland replied. "I'm about half an hour from heading to the church. My hostage is almost ready."
Jackson clenched his jaw. "Roland," he growled. "Your hostage should be ready now. What's going on?"
He could hear his partner clear his throat nervously. "Sir, she's...she...she's very weak and scared. She doesn't want to cooperate."
Jackson put a hand on his forehead and hung his head. "Roland," he said, becoming very annoyed. "What the f**k are you trying to tell me?"
"Rippner, sir, I'm having to dress her myself. I knocked her out with my gun because she wouldn't properly communicate with me."
Jackson shook his head. Why did he hire this dumbf**k in the first place?
"Just get a move on it," he spat. "And if you're not at the church when I get there, you know what will happen." He snapped the phone shut before Roland could respond.
Lisa exited the bathroom only seconds later.
"Hi," he smiled. His eyes seemed to dance and twinkle each time they were laid on her. "Are you ready to choose your dress?"
"Of course I am," she replied, returning the smile. "It's my wedding day."
************************************
Stay tuned for Chapter 12! Coming soon!
|
|
|
|
Post by ontheedge on Sept 21, 2005 20:39:15 GMT -5
Wow, this is very interesting.
|
|
|
|
Post by this bike is a on Sept 21, 2005 20:45:58 GMT -5
haha woww
|
|
|
|
Post by §ilvercell on Sept 21, 2005 21:38:11 GMT -5
lol!
|
|
|
|
Post by Murchadh on Sept 22, 2005 5:38:18 GMT -5
amazing, simple wonderful. I would say poor Lisa....but I can't not root for jackson. I can't wait to read chapter 12!
|
|
|
|
Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 23, 2005 9:48:08 GMT -5
Kaylee, that conversation, especially the way you wrote it, was priceslesss!!! LMAO!!! Try being a stand-up comic!!! Does that sound the same way we do, when we say the words "Cillian's wife"?? Sorry - I AM happy for him, I AM, I AM - but....well, you know what I am talking about, don't you? oh yes. i do. n i know i sound like that. i was telling my friend all about him and it went like this' " he's 29-30 and IRISh and the hottest thing ever. the only saddening thing it, is, it's that he has ..." ( my friend) " what, does he have cancer or something scary like that?" " no. a wife  " haha. <33 kaylee |
|
|
|
Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 23, 2005 9:55:48 GMT -5
Latissa, I just finished catching up with this story (after a long time) - I KNOW exactly why no one has replied! Everyone is dumb-frickin-struck!!! Where ARE you going with having Lise MARRY Jackson?  |
|
" 
Aug 31, 2018 5:37:36 GMT -5
Aug 31, 2018 5:37:36 GMT -5