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Post by moviechick1984 on Sept 23, 2005 20:24:52 GMT -5
Thanks Murchadh and everyone who loves my story. I"ve really enjoyed writing it. Dr. J Crane, Lisa has to marry Jackson so he won't kill her sister. He is so obsessed over her that he knows by threatening to kill one of her closest family members she'll be his. So he's forcing her to marry him so he won't kill her sister. Anyway, Chapter 12 is coming up soon!
Tata for now!
~LaTissa~
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Post by moviechick1984 on Sept 23, 2005 21:05:51 GMT -5
Chapter 12.
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Julie could not control her scared and nervous shaking while sitting in the church pew. Roland was seated right next to her, his arm around her waist. He held his black nine millimeter aimed at her back. There was no one else in the church except for a man dressed in a preacher's robe. He stood at the altar, flipping the pages of a Bible.
This whole situation made Julie so confused. She felt like she was losing her mind. She had asked Roland who's wedding they were going to. He had replied by saying "you'll find out."
The heavy oak doors opened and in walked a young man dressed in a sharp black tuxedo. He walked past Julie, glancing at her from over his shoulder. His grin was evil. She recognized him instantly. Those blue eyes. The man in the picture. What was he doing here? She cleared her throat.
"Who...who is he?" she asked Roland.
He kept his gaze straight ahead. He sighed.
"Jackson Rippner," he whispered. "He's the groom."
She opened her mouth to speak but Roland interrupted by saying: "and now here comes the bride."
Julie turned her head-and her heart seemed to go into cardiac arrest. It was Lisa. Her sister. Dressed in a strapless white satin gown and lace veil. In her hands she held a lilac bouquet. She looked scared to death. Her brown eyes wide with fear; her lips formed in a crooked smile.
Julie turned her eyes to the altar. Jackson stood there with his hands clasped at his stomach. A clever grin painted on the corner of his mouth. Eyes glued on Lisa as she approached him. He held out his arm and Lisa accepted. They turned to face the preacher.
"Dearly beloved," he began. "We are gathered here today to join this man and this woman in holy matrimony."
Dizziness clouded Lisa's head as he spoke those words. She felt like fainting. The knot in her stomach tightened when Jackson grabbed her hand and slipped a beautiful pink ice diamond ring on it.
"I do," he replied without hesitation as the preacher asked him if he took Lisa to be his lawfully wedded wife. Then it was her turn to answer.
She held out her hand and stared at the ring. It was gorgeous. Canaan had never given her jewelry this nice. Or this expensive. She loved him but he was one cheap son of a b*tch.
Jackson let out an impatient breath and grabbed her hand. He placed a shiny golden band in her palm and forced her to slip it on his finger.
"Now answer the man," he whispered.
She gulped.
"I...I...I...d-"
"Lisa!" called a familiar voice. Lisa, Jackson, the preacher, Julie and Roland all turned their heads to see the man who had burst through the doors.
Canaan. It was him. He looked like hell. His white T-shirt and jeans were torn and covered in mud and bloodstains. His face was dirty and bloody as well. His blonde hair was barely visible beneath all the dirt and grime. And he had a silver pistol aimed at Jackson.
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Stay tuned for Chapter 13! Coming soon!
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Post by this bike is a on Sept 23, 2005 22:35:01 GMT -5
ohmygoshhh.
!!!!idontknow what to say
look out jackson!!
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Post by moviechick1984 on Sept 23, 2005 23:16:21 GMT -5
Chapter 13.
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"Lisa", Canaan said breathlessly. "Don't marry him. He's a f***ing psycho. He tried to kill me. My car was ran off the road, causing it to flip twice. Luckily it landed on its wheels, just inches from hitting a tree."
He smiled and took a step further. "I landed on the edge of a river bank. When I stepped out of the car I fell into the water. I couldn't go to the hospital because I was worried about you."
He aimed the pistol higher. "Okay, motherf***er, let her go," he said to Jackson.
Jackson stared at him, his lips formed into an arrogant smirk. He turned his eyes to Roland and nodded.
Roland stood up and jerked Julie out of her seat. He raised his gun to the side of her head. She began sobbing and wailing intensely. Her screams echoed in the commodious room.
"Julie!" Lisa screamed, running towards her sister. Jackson grabbed her arm and pulled her back to him.
"Julie!" she kept screaming, reaching her arms out for her.
"Shoot her!" Jackson shouted, keeping a tight grip on Lisa.
Canaan turned his head to Roland and fired his pistol.
A bullet struck Roland in the top of his head, causing blood to shoot out of the wound. He was knocked off his feet and on his back landed in the pew that was his seat minutes ago.
Julie screamed uncontrollably as she struggled to crawl away on tied hands and feet.
"Let go of Lisa," Canaan ordered Jackson. "Right now."
Jackson turned his eyes away from his lifeless partner's body. The sight of the dark pool of blood spreading across the wooden pew and dripping onto the carpet brought forth tears. He looked at Canaan.
"Motherf***er!"
He reached into his tux jacket and retrieved his black nine millimeter. He pushed Lisa aside as he stepped forward and fired. Canaan fired simultaneously.
Both men fell to the ground.
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Stay tuned for Chapter 14! Coming soon!
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Post by this bike is a on Sept 23, 2005 23:19:12 GMT -5
!!!!!!!!!
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britt
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Post by britt on Sept 24, 2005 0:03:21 GMT -5
THAT SORT OF AN ENDING IS NOT LEGAL
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Post by moviechick1984 on Sept 24, 2005 0:23:17 GMT -5
Hey now, don't get your hopes up! It ain't over yet! Still got one (maybe two) chapters left!!!
I love keeping y'all in suspense!!
Glad everyone has loved my story so far.
Your comments make me smile! ;D ;D ;D
Tata for now!
~LaTissa~
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britt
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Post by britt on Sept 24, 2005 13:52:27 GMT -5
oh no, i didn't think it was over...I just meant the cliffhanger chapter ending! hehe..better not be over yet  |
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Post by this bike is a on Sept 24, 2005 16:50:45 GMT -5
nextchapterplease
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Post by §ilvercell on Sept 25, 2005 17:51:42 GMT -5
WOOT!
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Post by Kaylee on Sept 27, 2005 18:44:45 GMT -5
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOO NOT JACKSON!!!! er.... CANAAN! more. MORE!! loves it  <33 kaylee <33 Kaylee |
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Post by Murchadh on Sept 27, 2005 19:52:52 GMT -5
OMG thats evil, thats purely evil! How could you leave us like that! OMG not jackson! please post the next chapter soon! that was one h*ll of a cliffhanger
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Post by Dr. J Crane on Sept 28, 2005 11:31:54 GMT -5
OTTID to Murchadh and to everyone else!!! C'mon - this is mad!!!! I don't want Jackson to die, but then Canaan IS the good guy!!! OOOHHHH MMMMAAANNN!!!!! OMG thats evil, thats purely evil! How could you leave us like that! OMG not jackson! please post the next chapter soon! that was one h*ll of a cliffhanger |
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Post by Kaylee on Sept 28, 2005 16:10:37 GMT -5
what does OTTID mean??
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Post by hell0sunshine on Sept 28, 2005 16:25:37 GMT -5
ditto spelled backwards... haha i remember asking this same question
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