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Post by azina on Oct 21, 2005 22:03:21 GMT -5
Mmmmm ... Jonathan you were GOOD!! Can I have a homecoming like that? Huh? Huh, Alex? "Where have you been? Where have you been?" Ohhhh, Jonathan!!
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Post by fosforito on Oct 21, 2005 22:43:30 GMT -5
LMFAO!! ;D ;D
maan, it´s obvious you all guys liked the "action" in the chapter ..
..but have you noticed what was going on with Alex?
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Post by azina on Oct 21, 2005 23:31:22 GMT -5
I do notice that there seems to be some psychological struggle going on with Alex and that although Jon keeps asking her where she's been, she's never allowed to speak. Certainly there's more at work here than just sex and it will be interesting to see what happens to the relationship once the "action" is over.
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Oct 21, 2005 23:35:55 GMT -5
^exactly! Alex wanted Jonthan as badly as he needed her, physically! As Azina said, once the action is over, their past and everything that happened to the both of them is going to rush back and crash in front of their faces!
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Post by fosforito on Oct 22, 2005 3:53:01 GMT -5
Yeah, they actually hunger for each other, even after 12 years of not seeing each other although you might have noticed that Jonathan was the demanding and also dominating part in that chapter
- demanding, dominant and passionate and Alex couldn´t help but to let it happen coz she was struggling with her feelings and Jonathan literally ran over her.
At least that´s a proof for the right sexual chemistry between them.
BUT
we all know that there´s more to come, it just can´t stay on the sex only ..
...and now imagine yourself seing someone after 12 years and having those things happened between you (murder, rape, sorrow, assassination, Scarecrow ... the whole program)..
you simply can´t...
continue that simple from the point where you had stopped 12 years ago, like "kissy kissy and everything´s okay again".
NOT in this case
and now we have to ask ourselves:
How to begin to talk to each other now?
Both Jonathan and Alex have a secret hiding before each other so you can imagine how difficult it will be for them to find a start.
I´m very curious on your opinion, girls.
Greetz,
Alex
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Post by azina on Oct 22, 2005 11:48:19 GMT -5
I think there is going to be even a bigger communication gap than with my characters (Emily and Jonathan), because whereas there is the time gap between them, Alex and Jon have been wounded by fate and in Jonathan's case, he has seriously hurt her by murdering what was left of her family. But I also think because they are both wounded, they will also help each other in the healing process. I think it is telling they both meet up with each other again and have this encounter when they are most vulnerable - after they have both had mutual breakdowns, so to speak.
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Post by fosforito on Oct 24, 2005 22:53:26 GMT -5
Yeah you´re absolutely right. It will be difficult for them to find the right start to TALK not because of that what happened between them but also because of their "professional duties" they have to hide from each other: Alex: assassin job, having the order to observe Jon with the option to kill him if necessary - so the "killing wish" is not only a personal thing Jonathan: being involved in criminal activites (he doesn´t know that Alex knows that already although she doesn´t know the details), having killed Alex family (she knows that already, too), his experiments with the patients and his fear toxine. And here I want to mention, that we also don´t have any idey what happend to Jon´s family - to his mom and also to his "real father" - Dr. Burton... So there are still a lot of things for them to go through before a healing process can start. Or it will be more "step by step" in this case.... but what we can say already - and this might sound stupid but you can see it in this way - that the sex is kind communication tool for them at the moment because they understand each other there without words.. But we also know that can´t be enough to "reactivate" a relationship or to resolve personal problems. I think there is going to be even a bigger communication gap than with my characters (Emily and Jonathan), because whereas there is the time gap between them, Alex and Jon have been wounded by fate and in Jonathan's case, he has seriously hurt her by murdering what was left of her family. But I also think because they are both wounded, they will also help each other in the healing process. I think it is telling they both meet up with each other again and have this encounter when they are most vulnerable - after they have both had mutual breakdowns, so to speak. |
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Oct 26, 2005 14:16:44 GMT -5
^Well said Alex! I'm curious now to see what happened to Jonathan's family. Did he find out the truth about his real father? Did he hurt them? Also, I wander if Alex will ever tell him about their child and what his reaction will be if she does! I'm still waiting patiently for the next chapter!  |
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Post by fosforito on Oct 26, 2005 14:29:25 GMT -5
Hey! I know, I´m kinda late with the next chapters but at the moment I´m very busy with my Anatomy stuff at med school and playing gigs. I´m already writing (mostly on my PDA in the subway on my way to med school...) but I´m writing like between the chapters so I still need some structure. I hope to have the next chapter ready this weekend. What I can already say is that Alex will tell Jonathan about their lost child and you might imagine his reaction. You will also realize that something will happen to Alex what means: somthing will happen to her feelings towards him, her purposes and so on. With the time we will also get to know what happen to Jon´s family but I have to say that this won´t take so much "space" as it did in the first story (I mean their families in general) because I want to focus on Alex and Jonathan and also on them being involved in the plot of Batman Begins... ^Well said Alex! I'm curious now to see what happened to Jonathan's family. Did he find out the truth about his real father? Did he hurt them? Also, I wander if Alex will ever tell him about their child and what his reaction will be if she does! I'm still waiting patiently for the next chapter! |
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Oct 26, 2005 14:48:36 GMT -5
Wow. There's still so much we don't know yet. Well, this definitely ensures a very long story! And, take your time finishing the next chapter. I didn't realize you were in med school! A Doctor, a musician, and a great writer.. what can't you do!? |
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Post by fosforito on Oct 26, 2005 15:01:25 GMT -5
err... I´m not an actress!! haha ;D and speaking of doctor: uff... I still need sooo much time to even get there, so...  well I´m kinda scared that the story will get too long and you peple wouldn´t be interested anymore to read it (although I warned you before, that it´s the second part of the saga, haha) but feel free to post your thoughts and comments at any time.. I´m always curious to hear from you what do you think would happen next... Wow. There's still so much we don't know yet. Well, this definitely ensures a very long story! And, take your time finishing the next chapter. I didn't realize you were in med school! A Doctor, a musician, and a great writer.. what can't you do!? |
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Post by fosforito on Oct 27, 2005 15:10:10 GMT -5
hey guys! just wanted to let you know that I´ll have ch. 13 ready for you in about 1 hour or so (still translating but I´ll be ready soon) |
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Post by blue-eyed struck on Oct 27, 2005 15:20:03 GMT -5
;D
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Post by blue on Oct 27, 2005 16:02:33 GMT -5
Awesome ;D Glad to see that Med School hasn't made you "dead" yet... heheh.
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Post by fosforito on Oct 27, 2005 19:15:16 GMT -5
hahaha...no.. not yet.. Awesome ;D Glad to see that Med School hasn't made you "dead" yet... heheh. |
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