A twisted tale from a broken heart (COMPLETED)

fosforito
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A twisted tale from a broken heart (COMPLETED) Sept 11, 2005 8:27:31 GMT -5

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Post by fosforito on Sept 11, 2005 8:27:31 GMT -5

Hi to all!

I just wanted to make some publicity for my Crane fanfic again (went so far with the story, and still don´t have a name for it

).

For those of you who might be interested to read it:

Well, the story deals with Jonathan Crane starting with his years at high school/college, having a friendship to a girl (also an outsider like him) and the relationship is now turning into first love.

I know, the character itself is evil, or at least Jonathan turned into an evil guy/Scarecrow, but I want to look more "behind the scenes" as my opinion is, the is still something good in him and I just wonder what would have happened if there has been a special person around him..

The story contains some R material, that´s why I can´t/won´t post it on the board, so if someone of you is interested to read it, then drop me a line via PM or via the thread and I´ll PM the chapters (22 so far..), chapter by chapter.

For those who already read the story: also feel free to post your comments here.

... and BTW: as now it´s time to look for a title for the story ( :: *scratching my head*), so I´m glad about every sugguestion you have. ;D

Greetings and have a good sunday.
(although is a sad date ..9/11..but..)

Last Edit: Nov 3, 2005 7:51:04 GMT -5 by fosforito

rammsteiner Newly Infected Morgenstern ach scheine auf die Liebste meine Posts: 13	A twisted tale from a broken heart (COMPLETED) Sept 11, 2005 16:32:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rammsteiner on Sept 11, 2005 16:32:29 GMT -5 Please post it!!!!

fosforito Guest	A twisted tale from a broken heart (COMPLETED) Sept 11, 2005 17:49:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by fosforito on Sept 11, 2005 17:49:16 GMT -5 Hey! sorry, but I think I´ll get kicked out of the forum, if I do that LOL So I´ll PM you the first chapter, k? rammsteiner said: Please post it!!!!

benjaminsmommy Newly Infected Posts: 25	A twisted tale from a broken heart (COMPLETED) Sept 11, 2005 18:10:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by benjaminsmommy on Sept 11, 2005 18:10:32 GMT -5 hey i pm'd u.. but haven't gotten a answer yet buy yeah i want to read it tooooo!!!

fosforito Guest	A twisted tale from a broken heart (COMPLETED) Sept 11, 2005 18:13:05 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by fosforito on Sept 11, 2005 18:13:05 GMT -5 1st chapter is on its way ;-) benjaminsmommy said: hey i pm'd u.. but haven't gotten a answer yet buy yeah i want to read it tooooo!!!

omgiluvvscarecrow Hopelessly Beyond Infected CILLIAN! I'll stop the world and melt with you... Posts: 441	A twisted tale from a broken heart (COMPLETED) Sept 12, 2005 8:36:59 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by omgiluvvscarecrow on Sept 12, 2005 8:36:59 GMT -5 hey, i am starting to read a crane fanfic and it seems that ur work is going to be more exciting..

blue Hopelessly Beyond Infected Heh. Posts: 3,474	A twisted tale from a broken heart (COMPLETED) Sept 12, 2005 18:42:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by blue on Sept 12, 2005 18:42:20 GMT -5 Woot I want to read it! PM me PM me . As for the R rating... pf whatever, I want to read it lol

ontheedge Hopelessly Beyond Infected Posts: 1,152	A twisted tale from a broken heart (COMPLETED) Sept 12, 2005 20:27:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ontheedge on Sept 12, 2005 20:27:43 GMT -5 Alex, PM me the story ok
	Lisa, whatever female driven emotion based dilemma you're dealing with right now, you have my sympathy but for the sake of time and sanity, let's break this down into a little male driven fact based logic, one simple call saves your dad's life and it has to be made soon.

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A twisted tale from a broken heart (COMPLETED) Sept 12, 2005 22:58:09 GMT -5

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Post by azina on Sept 12, 2005 22:58:09 GMT -5

Okay, I was up to 3 a.m. bothering fosforito because I had to find out what happened next in the story. I must say thank you for sending the chapters promptly!

First off, the friendship of Alexandra and Jonathan and how she defended him even before she knew him ... so sweet! I just love that. I also enjoyed the image of Jonathan's glasses getting fogged up in the rainstorm while desperately trying to save the books. Also a very cute image.

As for some of the other scenes ... well you write very hot scenes ... well steamy is the right word. I can't go into details because this is a PG-13 forum *ahem*. But I am impressed that English is your third language and you're able to write those type of scenes coherently enough to translate. I'm impressed.

As for the ending (or at least where I left off), I was not expecting it: heartwrenching, sad and the emergence of Scarecrow, sexy and twisted all at once. You pulled it off with chilling (and sultry) precision. Bravo!

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A twisted tale from a broken heart (COMPLETED) Sept 13, 2005 6:27:45 GMT -5

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Post by §hannon on Sept 13, 2005 6:27:45 GMT -5

Oh yeah... the emergence of Scarecrow.
WOW, that was a shocker... and it was sexy... REALLY sexy... and twisted.

You know I don't read Crane fanfics. But, I made the acception for yours and Azinas.
And Tanya's, I have to get caught up on. lol

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A twisted tale from a broken heart (COMPLETED) Sept 13, 2005 6:29:49 GMT -5

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Post by fosforito on Sept 13, 2005 6:29:49 GMT -5

Thank you thank you.

I hope you´ll like the new chapters, too.

shannon said:

Oh yeah... the emergence of Scarecrow.
WOW, that was a shocker... and it was sexy... REALLY sexy... and twisted.

You know I don't read Crane fanfics. But, I made the acception for yours and Azinas.
And Tanya's, I have to get caught up on. lol

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omgiluvvscarecrow Hopelessly Beyond Infected CILLIAN! I'll stop the world and melt with you... Posts: 441	A twisted tale from a broken heart (COMPLETED) Sept 13, 2005 8:50:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by omgiluvvscarecrow on Sept 13, 2005 8:50:31 GMT -5 her fanfic is very exciting but i am more excited about how crane will become bad

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fosforito
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A twisted tale from a broken heart (COMPLETED) Sept 14, 2005 0:23:44 GMT -5

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Post by fosforito on Sept 14, 2005 0:23:44 GMT -5

Hi to all!

For those of you who already had read the first 22 chapters
- chapters 23, 24 and 25 are now ready to go!!

Just drop me a line if you want to continue.

And I want to give some credit to Azina.

She kindly offered my to do proof-reading of my new work.

So a BIG BIG THANK YOU to you, sista!!!

Last Edit: Sept 14, 2005 0:24:19 GMT -5 by fosforito