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Post by bluestar on Nov 7, 2011 7:13:50 GMT -5
Thank you for the link Zombie !!! A great way to end the story and you wrote it so well- loved the action and the idea of Darek as a virus and it was quite sad the way he died even if he was bad- you wrote the emotion beautifully and built up the suspense very well- you're a natural at this!!! CB for it all when I get the chance   |
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Post by Zombiekitten on Nov 8, 2011 9:54:11 GMT -5
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Post by bluestar on Nov 12, 2011 12:05:03 GMT -5
I can see why it would be;the fanfic was great! Looking forward to reading anything you write in the future. Here's your CB ! |
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Post by Zombiekitten on Dec 7, 2011 20:22:35 GMT -5
I did it ... I wrote another chapter...  Or let's say sort of an epilog. ;D I've done this primarily for my own pleasure. But if you enjoy it too I'm happy !!  Of course that additional 9th chapter can't top the finale in chapter 8 but... oh well, just read it.  Chapter 9: AftermathThe same procedure: If you are 18 or older I will send you the link via PM Have fun ! *giggl* P.S. I must be totally crazy, but there's even a sequel in the works.... |
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Post by bunnie24 on Dec 7, 2011 20:28:14 GMT -5
OH OH OH...send me the link! please?
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Post by The Phantom Lady on Dec 8, 2011 7:29:10 GMT -5
*Picks up jaw from the floor*
What a beautiful ending, as much as I loved the last part, this was so beautiful... despite poor Judith and her dreams, I felt so much for her and poor Ed trying to understand and all his guilt... I wanted to hug them both!
But what a way to heal her wounds! that was so beautifully described, so perfect and so right!
So sad to see this amazing story end, but I am really looking forward to the sequel!
Thank you so much for sharing this!
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Post by Pisces on Dec 8, 2011 16:58:25 GMT -5
OMG Zombie - I am SO thrilled that you tacked on an additional chapter to this wonderful fic!! And what a gorgeous send-off you gave the characters. I love your grid-world!!! So vividly imagined. This deserves a full-length review, and I will give it one ASAP!!! But had to let you know right NOW that this is beautiful, as always, and how excited I was to see that you had updated. ;D More soon...!!! |
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Post by Zombiekitten on Dec 8, 2011 17:29:30 GMT -5
Ah !! Squeee!! Thank you Bloody Rose and Pisces! @ Bloody Rose: I was a inspired by you as I began to write this chapter, 'cause at the end of chapter 8 you said something about the wounds Judith's soul might could have after these horrible events! |
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Post by wikkleshamrocks on Dec 9, 2011 3:45:00 GMT -5
Wooo! Link please honey! |
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Post by wikkleshamrocks on Dec 14, 2011 18:49:42 GMT -5
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Post by Zombiekitten on Dec 15, 2011 15:07:54 GMT -5
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Post by Cait on Dec 15, 2011 16:41:02 GMT -5
I think it's about time I read this all the way through, but I've lost all my previous PMs.  Would you kindly resend me the link, Zombie dear? |
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Post by Pisces on Dec 15, 2011 18:38:33 GMT -5
Ahh... what a lovely encore..!! Can I just say how happy I am that you are planning a sequel to this fic?? I've grown attrached to your Ed and Judith, and the idea that there will be more of them both is such a wonderful lure... I love your description of Dillinger in that dream: ...his silky, creamy skin like the carnal interpretation of a slick, polished, moonlight-coated ancient sculpture made of marble. I can just see this, and once again I'm so impressed that you can come up with such a poetic interpretation in a language that is not native to you. That's just amazing to me. Poor Judith, still haunted by her experience with Darek!! And it's clear that Ed has massive regret for ever creating his alter-ego - he's yearning to make it up to her and somehow erase the mistake. Which I love about him - he's not shrugging off what he created and the consequences of it - he's willing to man up and OWN it. Something I wish more men did!  I admire a man determined to fix something. Your Grid world is always ULTRA cool. It makes me hope like crazy that there will be something like what you have imagined in the third movie, because your imagery has a techno-elegance that I have thoroughly enjoyed. And - OH - that moment when they take a moment to appreciate one another in their gird suits - that makes me smile because I can really feel the warmth between them. Their flight on the dragonflies was also vividly imagined - I loved the way the wing was described: Delighted she let her hand slide over the blank shiny surface of one slender wing, thin like paper, but solid as steel. Just a little detail, but I could actually feel that alien surface, and it was honestly delightful. Also with the Grid water, and how it felt to her - you have SUCH a talent for describing what can be touched and felt!! Mmmmm... and then they find their perfect haven, their moment of peace. It's a quiet, beautiful love scene, and you feel that they are finally truly opening to one another, without distractions or fear. It's extremely intimate and emotional, and I almost felt that I was intruding on their private moment! And yet... it was FAR too hot to look away. I can't quote too much here, but..... I LOVED this little phrase: ... following his shoves.. *SQUEEEEE!!* *SIGH* What a special fic. I would never have cared if Cillian ever did Tron 3, had I not read this. But now that I have, I REALLY want it to happen. If it does, I know that I will be thinking of YOUR Dillinger constantly as I watch. To me, you OWN him. He's yours!!! Thank you for sharing him - and Judith - with us. And I'm so excited that there will be more!!!!!! CB for the entire experience of this story!! |
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Post by wikkleshamrocks on Dec 15, 2011 18:48:18 GMT -5
Awww Pisces you are so good at reviews and I must double say on everything you put there! I am also attatched to Zombz's characters and if Tron 3 ever did a Dillinger Cilly et al it would never match up to Zombz's creation! xx |
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Post by slashissexc on Dec 16, 2011 1:28:16 GMT -5
Please send it to me, im sure ill love it |
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Or let's say sort of an epilog. ;D I've done this primarily for my own pleasure. But if you enjoy it too I'm happy !! 
Would you kindly resend me the link, Zombie dear? 
I admire a man determined to fix something.