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Post by Pisces on Sept 8, 2011 15:55:22 GMT -5
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
Just read it and I LOVE IT!!! Best chapter so far. The dialogue between Judith and Darek is wonderful - very sweet, weirdly romantic and insightful.
I promise I will give you a better review tomorrow - I have limited time today and, as you said once to me, I want to be able to give my review of it my full attention!! ;D ;D ;D
But right now I can tell you that this is FABULOUS. CB!!!
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Post by Zombiekitten on Sept 8, 2011 18:00:14 GMT -5
Yeah, of course, Pisces, you certainly don't have to hurry with your comment.  You have my entire understanding!  Your time is limited... Tell me: You have a "watch" in your arm like in "In Time", have you ??  LOL Thanks so far for the comment!!!  I'm so happy you say it's the best so far !  Can't wait to finish the following chapters... |
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Post by Pisces on Sept 9, 2011 20:08:09 GMT -5
I am SO glad you have continued on with this fic, Zombie! I've been looking forward to every chapter! I like the way you transition from Judith reading her memo pad to the grid: The next day. Same dark blue room. So simple, and yet it transports the reader instantly - like the way a dream can shift from place to place. I cherish economy like this in a fic. And I can absolutely see Darek as he's standing there waiting, sleek and shiny... smooth. YUM. I love it when a man holds a woman's face as he holds hers. GAHHH. Can I just say that I wish some man would do THAT for me when I get home from work??? :-*You write erotica so well. Some NC-17 fics are just about what body part is where, but you really have a wonderful sense of the tactile... what things will feel like. I especially liked the way you described her suit gliding from her and ending up under her like a "silky blanket." I could actually feel that. Awesome!! And when they make love... whoa... (fanning myself!!) ILOVE that, in the midst of her smoldering bliss, Judith has that little moment of clarity and that one little wish... The conversation they have is especially wonderful. Darek's words - “I don’t know if love can be programmed at all. That’s a concept only you Users share. And even Users don’t seem to be able to explain this concept.” (sigh) So true!! And her words to him about needing someone who chose to love her rather than a slave.... so brilliant. So brilliant. It's a fantastic dialogue. (In a weird way, it reminded me of one of my favorite old movies - and you will appreciate the irony of the title - White Zombie) The ending, as it fades out to their lovemaking again... is perfect. You really know how to leave your readers hanging!!! ;D ;D ;D I can't wait for chapter 4~!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Post by Zombiekitten on Sept 10, 2011 12:24:01 GMT -5
Thank you so much Pisces. I'm glad I could get you fanning yourself again ;D White Zombie !? I know this movie, but I haven't seen it yet. I have only read a short description about it in a little book I have at home: 101 horror movies you must see before you die P.S. Chapter 4 is already in the works |
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Post by The Phantom Lady on Sept 10, 2011 14:21:50 GMT -5
... How did I miss chapter 3??
This wasn't just hot... it was steamy! and it was written so beautifully!
I wouldn't mind having a Darek of my own! lol... I also like the story, and I'd love to know who designed Darek... was it Dillinger??
Is there anything you can't do??
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Newly Infected
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Post by moxica on Sept 11, 2011 15:47:53 GMT -5
Bloody brilliant! Im in love with this fanfic!
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Post by ikklehen on Sept 15, 2011 19:11:06 GMT -5
iiiiiiiiiiiihhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I have missed ALL the last chapters! I just found this now! DOHH! I've only seen *1* please send me linkypoos please hunni! <3
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Post by Zombiekitten on Sept 16, 2011 6:02:18 GMT -5
I wouldn't mind having a Darek of my own! Me too, Victim of Love, me too... Several times I was thinking about how it would be if a technology like this would excist in some kind of way. To have a "virtual reality lover" OMG... Was it Dillinger who designed Darek? Hmmmmmmmmmmmm.....  You have to wait for the next chapters (won't take long, I promise )or you have to PM me LOL I won't tell it here in this thread. ;D moxica: Thank you so much !!! @ikklehen: Link is on the way ! Chapter 4 is coming soon... |
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Post by Miss Annika Crane on Sept 16, 2011 15:39:19 GMT -5
Send me the link! I wanna read it too ^^
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Post by ikklehen on Sept 16, 2011 17:09:48 GMT -5
WOO! ;D I just love the originality of your story, the whole concept! You play the themes of this fic so well and considering English is not your first language, this is incredible! I like the contrasts of each chapter and by the ending of the third I see there's room for more! I can't wait! The suspense is incredible! I love the play on the phsyce now that Judith is getting annoyed with the lack of real emotion, it's what we women do, eh! Fabulous job honey! I'm loving it! A long overdue CB for you on this one! <3 <3 <3
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Post by Zombiekitten on Sept 17, 2011 20:00:21 GMT -5
Awwww.... Thank you so much Ikklehen !!! Aaaaand: Chapter 4 is on !!! |
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Post by Pisces on Sept 17, 2011 20:29:45 GMT -5
SQUEEEEE!!! Link me!! |
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Post by The Phantom Lady on Sept 18, 2011 5:02:27 GMT -5
Wow I loved this chapter! I am seriously in love with this story concept! and I love the way you tell it, especially the way you described her heart when he kissed her!
Somehow I wanted to shake Ed and tell him a thing or two about what women feel like... but somehow there's something in his coldness that intrigues me a lot! Did someone hurt him or is it just the way he is?
I'm also curious now, can Judith perhaps use Darek to get under the skin on Ed?
Thank you so much for sharing this story!
I only have one complaint, because of this story my tea ran cold, LOL but I'm ready to forgive you!
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Post by ikklehen on Sept 18, 2011 16:48:42 GMT -5
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Post by Pisces on Sept 18, 2011 17:30:55 GMT -5
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! BEST CHAPTER YET!! Truly, you get better and better each time! I will have a more comprehensive review next time I log in - but I HAD to tell you right away how much I adore this latest installment!!! CB!!!! ;D ;D ;D
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You have my entire understanding! 
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