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Post by Zombiekitten on Oct 6, 2011 16:04:29 GMT -5
Awwww.... Bluestar !! Thank you so much for your lovely words!!  I'm so glad you liked that comparision between Darek and Ed, 'cause I really loved writing this stuff.  And now: Chapter 7 finished !!!! Well... it's more like a fun chapter  LOL. But yet with some important things happening. Enjoy ! |
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Post by The Phantom Lady on Oct 6, 2011 18:19:09 GMT -5
Oh my good goodness!
Your descriptions of Ed were so elaborate that I felt like I could just reach out my hand and touch him; you painted the scenes so perfectly. I feel just like Judith, every little detail about his home, anything about him makes me happy, I want to learn about him, your writing makes me want to get to know him! Especially the mention of the freckles made my mind wander!
I wish I could write like you!
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Post by bunnie24 on Oct 6, 2011 18:35:21 GMT -5
i would read it but golly I"m so out of it from my new antibiotics...I can hardly focus on the episode of Big Bang Theory  |
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Post by Zombiekitten on Oct 8, 2011 11:08:06 GMT -5
No problem Bunnie ! No hurry! You have to ENJOY this chapter. LOL Read it as soon as you feel better.  Oh and: Thank you so much Victim of Love !! Everytime I write about Ed I feel like reaching out my hands and touch him, too... And I can really feel him... Seems I managed to transport that into my writing Ed makes me happy too!!! |
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Post by Pisces on Oct 8, 2011 15:17:27 GMT -5
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Purple squee for Darek!!!! LOL! The morning after!!!!!!!!!!!! The most tender chapter yet. I love the way you described them both as daylight found them; especially Ed. I wanted to reach out and touch him myself! And your way of describing his eyes as "midnight silky"... The slight awkwardness and hesitancy with which they face each other here is sweet and authentic - they're unsure of where they are, putting one foot in front of the other with such care, as if afraid that the very ground will fall from beneath them at any moment. They both know how monumental the night before was for them each, and their caution is very believable. But even through that caution, their passion still burns, and that's what I love about this fic. Also, I'm noticing that Judith quite often is the one to take the lead in a situation - the one who will forge ahead while Ed might hold back. I like the differences in their personality; it adds a wonderful friction to their extremely new relationship. And THE SHOWER scene...  How Ed "drank" that water.... SO erotic!!!!! Every bit as steamy as the shower itself must have been!! (fanning myself!!!) The last part of this chapter - I won't spoil it here but OMG I admit, I was shocked!!!! I have a feeling there will be developments from this move...!!!! ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER!!! I am completely caught up in your story and cannot wait for the next installment!!! CB FOR YOU as soon as I am next able!!!!!
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Post by ikklehen on Oct 8, 2011 16:29:07 GMT -5
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Post by Zombiekitten on Oct 9, 2011 15:26:53 GMT -5
Thanks Ikklehen and Pisces ! Pisces... everytime I read your reviews I feel even more about this story and feel like writing further! It's magic. And one very enjoyable fact about your reviews is that I get to know certain aspects of the story from your point of view which is such a great feeling and encourage for me. The way you 're interpreting parts of the story is so amazing and it tells me that you really felt what I wanted to transport. And your way of describing his eyes as "midnight silky"... I have to admit I was searching for the English description of "having sleep in ones eyes" thats what we say in german. And I found "midnight silk". I didn't know if it could be used as an adjectiv LOL But I thought it sounds nice so I took it. ;D The last part of this chapter - I won't spoil it here but OMG I admit, I was shocked!!!! You haven't seen it coming? Hehehe... |
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Post by Pisces on Oct 10, 2011 18:32:15 GMT -5
Thanks Ikklehen and Pisces ! Pisces... everytime I read your reviews I feel even more about this story and feel like writing further! It's magic. And one very enjoyable fact about your reviews is that I get to know certain aspects of the story from your point of view which is such a great feeling and encourage for me. The way you 're interpreting parts of the story is so amazing and it tells me that you really felt what I wanted to transport. The last part of this chapter - I won't spoil it here but OMG I admit, I was shocked!!!! You haven't seen it coming? Hehehe... Well, I did, in a way, but I didn't think it would HAPPEN. I thought it was something that would only be contemplated. I literally gasped when that occurred!! Thanks for enjoying my reviews so much, lol - it's the least I can do in return for you supplying us with such a luscious and heartfelt fic!! AND all the art as well! You're a bit of a Tarantino yourself - able to write something so intriguing, and then bring what you've created in text to glorious visual life as well!! You are gifted with SO much talent. I just can't not acknowledge that. How much longer till chapter 8...?  |
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Post by Zombiekitten on Oct 10, 2011 19:03:34 GMT -5
Awwwwwwwww.... Pisces !! Thanks again for these lovely, hearty and uplifting words! It means SO much to me.... How much longer till chapter 8...? Oh well... it's a difficult chapter And I have the feeling it takes much longer than the other ones. Because it only consits of some sketchwork yet... But the pictures I have already in my mind... OMG... Actually I wanted to write on it this evening, for tomorrow I'm having a day off. But I got distracted by the PUB LOOOOOOL But it is so damn enjoyful there hahaha |
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Post by Pisces on Oct 10, 2011 19:29:09 GMT -5
Actually I wanted to write on it this evening, for tomorrow I'm having a day off. But I got distracted by the PUB LOOOOOOL But it is so damn enjoyful there hahaha LMAO!! Addictive, isn't it?? I haven't even been able to focus on the hockey game on TV tonight because I've been having such fun in there, too! ;D ;D ;D ;D SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! |
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Post by Zombiekitten on Oct 21, 2011 16:02:48 GMT -5
CHAPTER 8 !!! ;D ;D ;D I don't know if it makes any sense... LOL But the idea was just too tempting. ;D Put your 3-D glasses on, girls, and enjoy !!! 
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Post by The Phantom Lady on Oct 21, 2011 16:55:23 GMT -5
WOW That was so action packed! Just like watching a movie!
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Darek turning evil was a genius idea, it was shocking to read but it worked so well, and even if he didn't go all the way I can see Judy having some trouble considering Darek and Ed being identical!
A very, very intense chapter! I enjoyed reading that as much as my heart is still in my throat!
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Post by Pisces on Oct 21, 2011 18:42:09 GMT -5
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Post by Zombiekitten on Oct 22, 2011 12:02:39 GMT -5
Thanks Bloody Rose !! Especially for saying it was like watching a movie! Well it was a darn good movie in MY HEAD LOL I'm really happy you enjoyed this. Hehehe. *evilgrin* I love to thrill my readers!! ;D And you're might right what you said about Judith... @ Pisces: Thank you so far for this foretaste to your review!! I'm so glad that I managed to surprise you !! Hehehe! I love the feeling to have something which the reader doesn't expects and therefore gets surprised while reading. |
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Post by bunnie24 on Oct 22, 2011 12:14:47 GMT -5
I haven't read it yet....been working 1-10 shifts at work at week so it's kinda hard...when I have enough focus and energy---I'm always excited to read the next chapter Zombie |
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I'm so glad you liked that comparision between Darek and Ed, 'cause I really loved writing this stuff. 
